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Thoughts

By nalunatic

Humor / Romance

Thoughts


Happy had been sent away by Natsu and Lucy to go find Carla and Wendy. They were hoping to finally have some alone time; something that they hadn't had in a while since the bubbly exceed lived with them. As soon as Happy's blue little tail fluttered out the window Lucy and Natsu were basically on top of each other.

Lucy's POV

Lucy was ecstatic; finally she had gotten some time with her flame dork. Speaking of which, her "flame dork" wasn't really being a dork at all… More like a flame…oh God! Pleaseee don't finish, this is too amazing to stop right now. Lucy's own thoughts were making her blush and Natsu was making her more than happy, this was euphoric.

Oh my God, did I just moan? I hope he didn't hear that.

Natsu's POV

Was that a good moan or a bad moan? I honestly can't tell if she loves this or she wants it to be over.

Natsu was trying to get a hold of himself, his goal was to please Lucy as much as he could before, well… Before he himself decided it was time to… Release his tension…

Ah shit, whatever you do, do not finish yet. Think about something not sexy… No, don't look at Lucy! Okay, uhh, Gray being a prick or Erza being terrifying… Oh shit, I just thought of Ichiya! Oh crap, I can't think about this stuff too long now I'm not going to be hard! Crap look at Lucy, look at Lucy. Oh my God she's perfect.

Lucy's POV

Why isn't he making any sounds? Is he bored or just really focused? Lucy was now becoming severely self-conscious as the dragon slayer was staring intensely at her. She would've tried to cover her face from her embarrassment but she just ended up laughing in the midst of everything making Natsu's face turn from intensity to confusion.

Natsu's POV

Why is she laughing? Am I doing it wrong? I should say something sexy but I don't want to sound stupid… Is saying she's voluptuous alright? Oh god don't say voluptuous…

Natsu's brow creased in thought, though he applauded himself for never breaking rhythm.

Lucy's POV

Would it be weird if I told him to pull my hair? Lucy's thoughts were turning more erotic; only Natsu ever seemed to pull this side out of her and she was okay with it.

Hehe every good girl needs to be bad for a certain ma- OW!

"OW!" Lucy cried as her hair was yanked by Natsu's elbow.

Natsu's POV

GET OFF HER HAIR, IDIOT.

Lucy's POV

Okay, maybe no hair pulling… Lucy quickly got back into things, thoroughly enjoying herself though she was too embarrassed to admit it. Just then, Natsu gently but tightly pulled at her hair while kissing her forehead.

Ooh okay definitely hair pulling…

Natsu's POV

Oh, did she like that? Aw yeah, I'm a freakin' genius. Natsu smirked and looked down at Lucy once more who seemed to be enjoying herself more than she would ever admit. As he pushed on, he could feel his thighs burning.

Damn, how long have we been doing this? I mean, I'm totally not complaining, my God I'm not complaining. But, I've been on top too long… Geez I wonder if she'll switch?

Lucy's POV

Natsu seems tired… Lucy observed as he panted and struggled to stay in their rhythm. A sudden urge of dominance sprang on her and she rolled him so she was on top. Oh God, am I being too aggressive?

Natsu's POV

Oh my God this is awesome. It's like she can read minds, this is great. Why is she SO HOT? THIS IS SO HOT.

Lucy's POV

Huh, he seems to like it. Lucy noticed as Natsu had his goofy little grin as she worked on him. Ah this position is so embarrassing… This is just so… Ah! Ngghh… Lucy gasped as pleasure rippled through her. That was… Mildly… Un…ah…expected…

Natsu's POV

She just finished, time to go! Gotta go fast… Like I'm fucking Sonic I don't know… Natsu's thoughts were all over the place, thoroughly please with having pleased Lucy. He quickly flipped her onto her back once more, his own desire flowing through him fast and hot. Oh God… L…ucy…

Lucy's POV

Ahn.. Natsu… Lucy clutched onto his scorching body as they both ended in ecstasy. Lucy laughed breathily and kissed Natsu who was placing sloppy kisses all over her face.

Natsu's POV

Natsu looked down at the beautiful girl beneath him and thought how lucky he was and smiled. Shortly after, he smirked in pride and accomplishment making Lucy scowl adorably in mock anger.

Smooth as butter. That ice bastard can kiss my ass I'm the best.

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