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The Divergent High School

By LucyBradley

Romance / Humor

The Beginning

I want to thank everyone who is taking the time to read this. Also, I want to give full credit to Veronica Roth for creating such wonderful characters. I hope you all enjoy the story!

It's time for my first day at my new school I'm nervous but excited at the same time. I grab skinny jeans, a camo sweater, and combat boots to wear. "Beatrice if you don't hurry you'll be late!" My mom yelled.

"I'm coming!" I yelled from my bedroom. I grabbed my back pack, the keys to my red convertible, and a muffin before I leave. "Bye mom bye dad love you both!" I yell to them. I hear them yell bye before I leave. When I pull up to the school I grab my schedule and quickly walk down the hallways scanning for my locker, and I accidentally run into someone.

"I'm sorry I wasn't paying attention." A boy spoke he bent down and grabbed his stuff. He looked at me and he had dark blue eyes they were beautiful. "I'm Four." He told me. I was about to tell him my name was Beatrice, but I always hated that name so I told him my nick name I started at my old school.

"I'm Tris." I said smiling.

"You new here?" Four asked me.

"Yeah." I simply replied still embarrassed from bumping into him.

"What class you have next?" He asked. I was about to answer when four other guys ran down the hallway yelling Four.

"Hey Four." They all said smiling, then they looked at me.

"Are you trying to hook up with another girl?" One of them asked. Four rolled his eyes.

"No Zeke I'm trying to help her find her class!" Four told him. Zeke took my schedule.

"Her locker is number 359 and she has math next." Zeke smiled. Four jerked the schedule out of his hand and handed it to me.

"Your locker is right next to mine and Christina's come on I'll show you have class with Uriah next." Four smiled. A boy ran up to me and put his arm around me.

"I'm Uriah." He said smiling and tried to speak in a cool voice. I smiled trying not to burst out laughing.

"Get away from her you idiot." Four pushed Uriah away then Four, Zeke, and two other boys started laughing. Uriah, Zeke, and the two other boys stopped in front of me.

"Now that you know Uriah and Zeke you should get to know us! I'm Will." The boy on the right spoke. The other guy smiled.

"I'm Peter." I smiled at the five guys I barely knew them and already thought they were cool.

"So you gunna tell us your name sweet cheeks?" Uriah asked trying to sound cool again. I couldn't help it I laughed they all stared at me as if I was insane.

"I'm Tris." I told them.

"Well Tris are we your first friends?" Zeke asked. I nodded telling them yes. They all looked shocked.

"What?" I asked.

"You don't even know us and you think of us as your friends?" Will asked.

"I can tell by how you all are acting now we will get along." I simply told them. They all looked at each other then back at me smiling.

"Okay friend lets get you to your locker!" Peter shouted. Four whispered in my ear.

"Just thought you should know now they're nuts and Zeke is Uriah's brother so you can kind of tell if Uriah's nuts Zeke is." I chuckled and Uriah snuck between us.

"Can I hear the secret?" He asked.

"No." Four told him. When we got to my locker Four told me I can meet Christina and Shauna in my math class. I nodded telling him okay.

"You'll probably sit with us at lunch considering the girls hang out with us because we're all great friends and Christina is Will's girl friend." Peter told me. I smiled and looked at Will his cheeks turned bright red. Then Uriah jumped up beside me and grabbed my hand.

"ON TO MATH WE GO BUDDY!" He yelled dragging me to the class room I laughed all the way there.

"Uriah! Let that poor girl go!" Someone yelled. Two girls walked over.

"Sorry Christina." He said making a pouty face. She pointed to a desk.

"Go sit puppy." He laughed.

"Yes mam!" He ran off to the desk.

"Are you new?" Christina asked.

"Yep." I replied. Both of the girls smiled.

"Welcome!" They both yelled.

"I'm Christina!" She said excitedly.

"I'm Shauna!" The other girl told me. I smiled.

"I'm Tris and Christina my locker is right between yours and Fours!" I said excitedly.

"Hey Tris!" They both yelled I laughed.

"It is? That's awesome! Wait so you already met Four?" Christina asked.

"Yeah he was the first person I met then I met Zeke, Uriah, Will, and Peter." I responded. When I mentioned Will she blushed. "I know about you and Will too." I winked. We all laughed. The teacher came in and I sat between Shauna and Uriah with Christina in front of me.

"Time to start class!" The teacher shouted. "Today we will work in groups Uriah pick your group!" Uriah stood up.

"I want Christina, Shauna, and Tris." He told her. We smiled and huddled up we barely worked on the paper we mostly talked.

"I can tell we are all going to be great friends." I told them smiling. They smiled back.

"I hope so." They all said and we laughed. About two hours later it was lunch time I found out Four, Zeke, Lynn, and Christina were in my second class which is language. Then Peter, Marlene, Zeke, Christina, and will were in my third class which is art. When I got in the cafeteria the gang saw me and yelled for me. I walked over to the table and went to sat by Christina when Four and Zeke grabbed me and pulled me in the seat next to them.

"So little Trissy poo how's high school?" Uriah asked me. I laughed at the nick name.

"Good Uri bear what about for you?" I asked wiggling my eyebrows. Everyone laughed.

"Okay you two knock it off." Christina said smiling and takes a piece of my dauntless cake. I glare at her.

"Did you just take my cake?" I asked.

"Yes I did," She smiled. "Chill I will buy you more."

"That's okay," I started. "My family is a little wealthy so we have like two big cakes at home." Everyone looked at me with evil grins and my eyes widen. "I am so stupid." I mutter to myself.

"PARTY AT TRISSY POOS!" Zeke yells. As soon as he yelled that it was time for our next class, I found out I had science with Christina and Will, social studies with Zeke and Uriah, music with Lynn, Peter, and Shauna, then gym with the whole gang! It was finally time to leave I got in my convertible when Uriah gets in front, Zeke, Christina, Will, and Lynn get in the back seat.

"What are you all doing?" I laugh.

"Girl this car is like totally amazing!" Zeke yelled in a girls voice.

"Just drop me off at the café down the street." Uriah said while putting on sunglasses and putting his feet on my dashboard.

"Get your dirt shoes off my dashboard!" I yelled. They all laughed, got in their cars, and took off to their houses. When I got home I saw my parents were gone so I sat on the couch and watched movies. Man I thought I would hate it here but I love my new friends.



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