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Twilight's Queen

By xbabygirlx



Bella POV

"Jacob! Why are you doing this to me?" I screamed as he threw me against the wall. Suddenly I began to lost consciousness and as I did I saw Jacob fall to the ground and a tall dark stranger gently lifted me up as I finally fell into the darkness.

1 hour earlier

"Hey Bella! Bella?" said Eric. I don't know what was going on but all I knew was that I had to be daydreaming. I completely ignore Eric and kept daydreaming about the tall handsome stronger from my dream last night….


I had just fallen asleep and when I woke up again I was lying in a strange bed wearing a silk nightgown. Suddenly the huge mahogany doors open and a man in a well-tailored suit comes in. "Good Morning your highness I was just about to wake you I hope you slept well." He says as he walks into the nearby doorway. "I slept very well John. Where's Edward?" I say as I stretch. "He is with your father and his in a meeting with the council and will soon be up here. So your highness what would you like to eat this morning?" asks John as he hands me a matching silk white robe. "Hum… How about Pancakes with whip cream?" I say as I put on the robe. "Coming right up your highness." Says John as he closes the door. "Oh good morning John is she up?" asks a strange man's voice. "Yes, your highness she is, she just woke up a few minutes ago." said John as I heard his footsteps disappear down the hall. Then after a moment a tall man with brown hair and scorching brown eyes walked into the room smiling. "Good morning my Bella." says the man. "Good Morning!" I say shyly. The man slowly approaches the side where I still was sitting and he bent down a kissed me on my lips and pretty soon we deepened it, it felt right and we slowly fell back onto the bed not breaking our kiss.

But of course before anything could happen I woke up & stopped daydreaming and Eric, Ben, Angela, and Jacob were staring at me.

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