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The Queen's snake

By kataradragon

Mystery / Fantasy

Prologue

Never in my long dark life, would I ever dream that a little girl, a freaking weak human girl was the one who had the power to summon me. The little girl looked at me with big eyes and smiled. " Mom!." she ran to me and hugged my legs.

'MOM!'

I stared down at her with shock and didn't know what the hell was going on. Am a demon, one of the powerful demon there is and now a little human girl summon me and call me mom.

"No, no. Am not your mom little one." I pushed her away from me.

Directly she begins to cry loudly. " MMMOOOMMMM!." Her scream was so powerful that all the trees were flying away from the ground, and I was near to fly away too.

" Okay, okay. I am mom." She stop screaming and hugged my legs tightly.

How can this human have so much power?. I have lived in more than 15000 years and I have never seen a human just cry out power. The little girl laughs in happiness and jumped up and down. " Carry me, mommy."

When she call me mommy it was like a punch to my face. How could this happen to me?.

She jumped more and was demanding to be carried. Against my will, I pick her up and held her close to my chest. She gave me a toothless smile and played with my dark hair.

" Mommy, mommy."

" Yes", I said through my teeth.

"I want a deal."

Please be a stupid deal so I can eat your soul and go home.

" What sort of deal do you want to make?."

She stop playing with my hair and looked down so her hair was falling down over her eyes.

"I want revenge against the people who destroyed my family."

How many people could have hurt her?. She doesn't even look older than 5. This sound like a fast one. I lift up her hand and kissed her palm and the next second a beautiful flower tattoo was on her palm. " Deal."

After I said that her body was shaking and before I know it she laughs in a dark voice and looked at me with evil eyes. " You walk into my trap."

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