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Once upon a time in neverland

By AmayaAkaya

Adventure / Humor

How it all started

(Araya's POV)

I woke up to my alarm which was playing loud music. I turned in my bed to look over to my clock. It read 06:45. I decided to stay in bed for a few more minutes since I didn't have to go before 08:15 to catch the bus. So I closed my eyes and quickly fell asleep again. After a few minutes I woke up to my younger sister, Christine, jumping up and down on my bed. "Wake up! Wake up! You're gonna be late for school again" the energetic 7 year old yelled. I chuckled softly and got out of bed. Iwent to my bathroom, brushed my teeth and braided my hair so it looked like the braid that Elsa from frozen had. I walked down stairs and ate breakfast while watching an episode of my favourite series, Once upon a time. I had come to season 3 and it was absolutely my favourite one. Though somehow I managed to fall asleep in the middle of the episode... I guess I hadn't had enough sleep like always... Well, It's what you get when you stay up really late and watching a movie.

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