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The Kings Heir

By Rangel Farias Júnior

Adventure / Fantasy

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"shut up" bellowed the lord knight "help, master, help!" screamed the girl, with a voice filed of terror "he don't care for you girl, no one care for a slave like you...", "she is mine no one touch in my things" bellowed a boy with messy black hair, his left eye is a deep dark green his right eye is blood red, he is 5'7" tall, build like a hunter, he wore a black short that ends in the knees and is shirtless a strong stomach, he has a Falcata in the right hand and a pugio in the left in his chest is the hunter mark "let go of her knight or try me" says the Hunter in a low and deadly voice "beat it kiddo" snapped the drunk knight "so you'll try me" and the young Hunter begin to walk "' let her go'" he say in the hunter voice "yes my lord" the knight let the girl go and cower "I'm sorry hunter I didn't knew it" the knight begged but the hunter just walked and says "I don't care you touch what is mine and think you can order me you'll die for that Knight" he strike the knight with the sword knight knew no more "Lilith where were you?" The Hunter asked "looking for you my lord then this knight attacked me" sobbed the girl "came love I'm here now" said the Hunter "how I hate your father because of his ego I can't marry you love a slave he make you a slave, today I was crucified you know the slut had sex in front of the cross I threw her in a bonfire now I'll use you" ... Her screams of pleasure were heard in the whole castle
"I love you hunter I truly love you" "I love you too Dear"

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Katherine Drotar: Loved your story. it gripped me right from the first page and I couldn't put it down. You are a very talented writer. your main character was strong while still being emotional. The only hard part I found was the repetition of the story from 2 different points. (it made me want to skip ahead) I u...

Helloitsemily: I am a girl that gets bored easy so does lots of things at once but this was incredible it made me read all of it and not get bored

Ginger: I like the idea behind this; the idea and story itself are great, However, I'm finding typos periodically and some of the sentences could be worded a bit more clearly. You might want to 'show' a little more than you 'tell,'

Deleted User: I can easily identify with the characters as having gone through those terrible times myself. The writer has skillfully brought yet another side of those days to life. A good read which I recommend to everyone.

Nanasha: I thought I'd written a comment on this story, but for some reason, I guess it didn't go through. Anyway, so this story is intensely addictive. I liked how the author uses established mythology but then gives it a unique twist. The idea of goblins all coming from the head of the king is an ama...

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Kevin Brand: My overall rating: 4.8/5 starsLoved. Every. Second. Everytime I came back to continue reading I got this overwhelming feeling of getting hooked on the first sentence... Over and over and again!The only things that were missing for me include more descriptions on what happens when Reuben touches s...

bloodrosemaiden: I love this book!! I have read it several times and though there could be improvements I applaud the author. I know positive feed back is appreciated!! I enjoy reading about the learning the different character's backstories, and the affects in the overall story!

Krupa Kataria: the detailing is really awesome ....the characters, ur plots jst too Awsm ,m waiting for the further chapters please do complete it ...like m really craving for those ones ...great job with words too ..please complete the further parts ...

Warren Bull: I thought this was a fast=paced thriller with elements of several other genres woven seamlessly in. It hooked me early and held my attention throughout. I liked the humor and surprises along the way. I really enjoyed the novel. I am not a big fan of romances or paranormal works,but when those ele...

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