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The Cuddle Puddle (Remake)

By Zenkx

Romance / Humor

Authoress' Notes

Authoress' Notes:

This was a TOTALLY random thought, believe me.

So I'm playing a F!Mage Lavellan now, although I am still unsure if I should continue it. Somebody linked me the ending of the Solas romance (aarrggghhh!), and I thought of this. If ordinary people like us turned to our friends to comfort during moments of heartaches, I think it's only right that the Inquisitor should, too.

Also, BUTTS! XD

I'm using my Idril Lavellan mage for this story, but it's not connected to my previous story, "Ordinary Day". I have something lined up of my F!Rogue (or probably Mage… I do love the Knight Enchanter XD) Travelyan, though I'm not sure when I can actually start typing it down.

Anyway, hope you like/ comment/ fave!

UPDATE: Yeah, I had to remake it. Long story short, the previous one got replaced by the wrong edit, and the original story deleted. Dumbest. Fanfic. Mistake. Ever.

Anyway, personally, I felt like the original one was better, but well… I had to try and remake it. If you've just read this fanfic, I hope you like/ comment/ fave. If you have read the previous version, I'm sorry… ~_~"

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