princess777 would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

Avatar Book 1: The Fire Siblings

By princess777

Action / Adventure

Chapter 1: Meeting The Siblings

Argh! I can't believe I failed again! I had him! Stupid pirates! Stupid Uncle with his stupid Pai Sho piece! I hate this!

"Ahhhhh! Let me go!" someone screamed in the distance.

"What was that?" my uncle and I asked simultaneously. "It came from over there!" I exclaimed, pointing North. We ran towards the noise. I set eyes upon about ten firebenders surrounding two children. The boy looked to be about ten and the girl looked about 5. The eldest had a fresh burn mark twisting up his arm.

"Let us go and we promise not to hurt you!" the boy called out.

"You promise not to hurt us?" One soldier questioned in a mocking tone.

"Ok, you asked for it," the boy said. He looked at the girl and nodded. They took up stances and shot out streams of fire at the soldiers. It was like a whirlwind of fire that managed to knock out all ten soldiers. It seemed, though, that the boy had a hard time producing fire.

"Impressive!" my uncle exclaimed. The two children whirled around, still in their stances.

"Who are you!" the children demanded.

"I am Iroh and this is my nephew, Prince Zuko! Who are you?" asked my uncle.

"I'm Zuron and this is my sister, Keisha (pronounced Kye-Sha)," the boy said.

"Where are your parents?" asked uncle.

"Dead," answered Zuron. "They were wrongfully murdered for treason that they didn't commit."

"Oh, I am sorry," Uncle continued.

"It's alright," Zuron replied. He turned to me. "Prince Zuko, I have heard of you. Please allow me and my sister to join you in your quest to capture the Avatar."

I was about to say that they were only children, but I started to think it over. Yes, they're children, but they're strong as well. They shall be useful. "Very well, you both may join. Now let's get back to the ship!" I ordered.

Continue Reading Next Chapter
Further Recommendations

Puleng Mabokela: One of the best stories I've ever read please updates I'm reading it on both wattpad and inkitt.

Lydia Worgu: I love the book so muchAnd I think plot is well planned and great…Keep on writing author…You're really good at it❤❤❤

Trisha Adelaide: Great story, well written, and seriously not cliché. Each chapter always makes an unexpected turn and put you ate the edge of your seats. All in all, a great read. Can't wait for the next book, the wait is killin' me

Menna Wael Balbaa: great story go ahead 😃😃😃

carolafarrington: I did enjoy reading this fast paced entertaining novel. I liked the characterisation and engaged with the main characters. I also quite liked the predictability of the plot. It made for an easy relaxed read.

Paulette Martin: Well, here we go again (thank you Ms. Fall). I really like this series. Mystery with action and a romance without so much sex I'm embarrassed reading it!

Paulette Martin: I've been thinking about Preacher finding his one. Can't hardly wait to read the complete book.

Maria Logotheti: interesting so far with minors mistakes

More Recommendations

Paulette Martin: I've read the Stone Knights at Amazon and love the series. Been wanting something on Tripp. There are some editing issues so far, but thanks for a story on Tripp.

jufern78: Short story but It’s precise. The feeling of devastated being left alone and need to shoulder the financial responsibilities. You might say life is not fair and cruelty but if you believe and keeps on striving you will surpass what ever difficulties it has.Love conquers everything.Such a wonderfu...

Keshia Mcphatter: Awesome Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see what happens next!

fairytail zero: I love the story but I wish it was longer I finished it way too fast

Mkgh05: I liked the plot a lot because it teaches to overcome struggles within us. It is not just a story of abuse or romance but one that teaches that life is not over yet and can be lived, that there is always hope of that one person who can be ypur everything. This book is full of sexual abuse and vio...

{{ contest.story_page_sticky_bar_text }} Be the first to recommend this story.

About Us:

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.