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the Secret House (Harry Potter Fanfiction)

By Marissa Renee Snyder

Romance / Fantasy

1.The Secret House

1. The Secret House

"Harry!" I called his name madly "Harry James Potter!" I call again using his middle name.

"Yes Ginny" He said his voice clam his eyes on me "Ginny what is it?" I looked up at him very hesitant feeling the rage fill me. "How come you didn't tell me about the other girl?" I ask him he looked down at his feet with a light smile.

"I didn't want to tell you because I know you'd go crazy and flip out. Also your to important to lose I love you." I smiled at him I mane it was only one mindless mistake. I guess I should forgive him for it…

"Am I forgiven?" He asked me his big blue eye laid on me. "I have to think of about it." I told him truthfully. He just looks at me like I was crazy. "You have to think about it." He ask me sarcastically and sounding unhappy. I just walked away but before I could he grab my arm.

"Ginny please. Don't do this." his voice was low filled with anger and sadness. "Too late" I said then walked away I felt proud of myself like I just defeat a dragon. I felt the power fill me.

Oh what am I going to do with him? I though. I said I was going to forgive him but I couldn't this time. I changed my mind at the last minute and didn't. My guess is because he's done this before. I can't tell a lie but I trust Harry. I do but he sometimes just makes me so mad that I can't stand him I guess to day is one of those days.

When I get in to the dining hall I notice Luna sitting with my brother Ron and Hermione all sitting together talking among there selves but when I got over to them they where quite.

"May I sit with you guys?" they all look at me with discuss "Sure but you might want to lave when Harry comes. You hurt him Gin" Ron told me. He could be a goof at times but he can also be a friend I understood why he was mad at me. But you see I have my reasons for breaking up with Harry some of them I just don't want him to know yet.

"Ron be nice." Harry said from behind me. I looked over at him his eyes where cold filled with rage and anger. Something I didn't like to see him go through. "Ginny can sit with us if she wants, she doesn't have to lave when I'm around." He told my Goff of a brother.

"Sit" He tells me. I sit down next to Ron and Harry sits down next to me. "Harry" I wispier. He looks over at me. "Yes Ginny?" He whispers back. "Look Harry I have to talk to you." I told him shyly

"What is it Ginny?" he asked me. "I-" before he could say anything I felt his lips on mine and it only felt like it was just him and me no one else.

"Harry. What I wanted to say was I love you" I told him with a smile. Ron, Hermione & Luna all looked at us. "Aww" Hermione and Luna said. Ron just sat there with a lie of a smile on his face. "Ron. Can I talk to you" I ask him. He rolls his eyes and gets up from his seat.

"Why can't you be happy for me?" I ask him.

"What in the bloody hell do you mean? Ginny I am happy for you & Harry" He told me with a real smile on his face. "But I saw you. You looked mad!" I Yelped. "Ginny what I'm mad about is you didn't tell him about something you should have." He told me crossing his arms around his chest.

"Ron I did tell him what I wanted to tell him. I don't know what in heavens you're talking about" I told him walking away. When I got back to the table Hermione and Luna where gone "would you like to go for a walk?" Harry asked holding his hand out for mine. "I'd love too" I said putting my hand in his. "It didn't take you long to forgive me." He told me with a laugh.

"I Know. It not like you to be with another girl. But why did you do it?" I asked him turning to face him and raping my arms around his waist "It was before we started dating." He told me. "And she wasn't really anything to me she was just some girl I met. I never even kissed her." He s aid pushing us into the grass.

Landing on top of me. "Can you do one thing for me?" I asked him sweetly.

"What would that be?" He asked looking down at me.

"Kiss me" I told him. He slowly put his lips to mine. His kiss was soft and tender and loving. His body started moving on mine. "Harry not here" I told him he got off me and sat there looking at the water.

"But we could go some where." I told him.

"Ginny where can we go?" He asked me. I looked over at him.

"We don't have to go any where! We can stay here. We can build a secret house. In the woods." I told him. He looked at me like I was crazy. "How are we going to build a house?" he asked me sounding surprised.

"Using Magic!" I crawling into his arms. "Can't we try? Please for me?" He looked down at me chuckled and said. "Fine. Come on" by the time we get into the woods I see the perfect spot. "There" I point it out.

"Now what do we do?" He asked me. "Take my hand and close your eyes" He took my hand and shut his eyes. I lifted my wand and before I know it there was a big huge house in front of us "You can open your eyes" he opened his eyes looking shocked. "Wow" was all he could say.

"It's so big. How are we supposed to make so no one can see it if it's so big?" He asked me. I didn't really think of that. "Hmm. Who says we need to make it so no one can see it is so fair in the woods. And plus no one comes this fair in the wood anyway." I told him "come on lets go inside." I take his hand and lead him into the house.

"We can't tell anyone. Not even Ron & Hermione" I told him. Yes I know it sounds wrong and I know we can trust them but I just think we should keep it between him in me. "You do know we have to think of what if some one dose come to this spot in the woods. We need to have a back- up plan" He said joyfully. The inside was big. When I walked in to the huge living room there was a couch and behind the couch there was a huge old looking piano.

"Harry look! It's a piano!" I ran over to it. I started playing it.


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