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Undertale Chatroom

By Rainbow

Humor

Usernames

CoolSkeleton95 - Papyrus
DETERMINATION - Frisk
GoatGardener - Asgore
CoolSkeleton95iscool - Sans
StrongFish91 - Undyne
πŸ’£βœŒπŸ‘ŽπŸ’§πŸ‘πŸ‘‹πŸ‘ˆπŸ’€β„πŸ‘‹πŸ’§β„ - Gaster (MADSCIENTIST)
NAPSTABLOOK22 - Napstablook
nafkambglrlzga - Monster Kid
GoatGardener - Asgore
GoatMom - Toriel
HotLegs - Mettaton
OnionKin - Onionsan
UrImportant! - Nice Cream Vendor
burgersinhell - Burgerpants
MUFFET25 - Muffet
Jerry - Jerry

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Madison O'Neal: Although the book may be good the grammar is horrid and it's hard to concentrate on the story when having to correct the mistakes of the author I suggest the author go back and correct things to improve the enjoyment of the book overall and the app should proof read things before they are publish...

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