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I'll Be Yours Eternally

By psychovampire11

Romance / Fantasy

Prolouge

March 15

Dear Diary,

Six months ago, Dante saved the world from destruction again. I helped a little, even though I felt like I couldn't do much. Since that incident, I've been worrying, secretly of course, about Dante and his demon slaying job.

He's told me to not worry about him. I took his word for it. Yet I can't help but feel a sense of protection for him. That's what people in love do, right?

Anyway, in two months, I'll be 21. I already have myself a car, doing part time jobs as a freelance artist and writer, or poet, and helping Dante with his devil hunting jobs. Still going to school to get some sort of degree in English, and possibly in something related to myth or the paranormal.

I still can't believe it's been almost 2 whole years since I met Dante. It feels like I just met him a month or so ago. Maybe because of my parent's disapproval for him at first. My brother and sisters seem to love Dante so much to want him to stay with us, but he had to go back to his shop Devil May Cry to keep business running there.

I'm looking for myself someplace to live. I don't care if it's a small camper trailer or an apartment, I just want to get out... NOW! I can feel myself wanting to scream for freedom. I've been here in my parent's house long enough.

I've denied the call for almost a year and this time I'm going to listen to it. There is a part of me that is calling out to Dante...My heart.. No..

My Soul is calling out to him. He haunts my dreams, even if he or I come to visit everyday either at his place, my parents, or someplace else. His blue eyes seem to calm me and excite me at the same time. He's bringing out the part of me that's been tearing away at the wall I built around my entire being; the wild part of me that my parents wouldn't approve of.

I want to have taste of life. I want to party all night, have a drink and have a nice time with Dante. That's all I'd like.

To be in Dante's life and him to be in mine. I'll admit that ever since Dante came into my life ,more likely I came to him first, I've felt so different. Adventure, danger, and feeling like I can fly into the sky is what I want and feel when Dante is near.

Faith heard someone call her name, saying that Dante was at the door. She had forgotten that today was her sister Hope's birthday. He was going to bring a pizza and drinks over. She smiled as her heart took flight at Dante's thoughtfulness.

Well, have to go. Dante is going to throw a party for Hope's 18th birthday today.~

She closed the powder blue book, scooted her chair under her desk, and then walked down the steps to find Dante holding a box of pizza with cans of soda on top. She tiptoed and dropped a kiss on his cheek, earning her a smirk from him which made her blush pink. "Ready to rock?" he asked. 

"Yep."

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