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My Rewritten, and Well Rehearsed Death

By notaninspiration

Adventure / Scifi

Fly Away For Me, Please

I don't want to lie, I cannot say goodbye, because if I do, I will lose you

Life isn't about fun and games, its about the pain and strains.

I'm sorry if what you expected was far better than me, but no matter how many times I change, I cannot destroy the melancholy .

Time is of the essence, but I always run out of it.

I cant stand to see you wait, but for however long I'm away, you never seem to mind I'm late.

Whatever did I do, to make you take Their world away?

Are they your target of destruction, suffering and malfunction, or are They just a ripple in the water, for you to repeat the process till' your left on your own, and all that's left is the latter?

I cant stand to see your life swift by, and all the power I can hold, isn't enough for your destiny to unfold.

Because all I have is you. Was you. Will you?

Stay, and not leave, because that's all people would like to do.

But I cant even do that. I am a coward, a pathetic heap of a mess.

But I will always run, I have no where else to go. Chasing after what someone else had lost, I can truly call myself a cost.

A cost for what? I'm sorry. I must apologize.

I am leaving you all alone.

It's safer this way, much, much safer.

Than with me, its far more dangerous than it would initially seem.

But you can do something for me, something far greater than any poor mans wealth.


You can Fly away for me, please.

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