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Bratz Drabbles

By BouncingSunflower

Romance / Drama

Another Break-Up - Jade & Cloe

“It’s like a drill battering my brain... I can’t hold my sanity any longer, Kool Kat...” Cloe whinged, whilst resting her head upon her best-friend’s lap, her blonde locks already resembling a birds nest almost. Cloe was upset, in distress, all due to Cameron and his spiteful ways once again.

“Try to take it easy, Angel!” Jade suggested, even when she knew it was easier said than done. Jade cared about Cloe a lot; she was her best-friend for life after all, along with Yasmin and Sasha of course. Cloe was her closest friend. Jade kept her palm resting against the blonde’s cheek, the side of her face, as she continued to caress and caress delicately with her thumb. “He’s just a jerk, you know? I honestly don’t understand why you waste your tears on him... not to mention always getting back together with him after every break up...” Jade uttered the last few words in a much quieter tone now, her green-tinted hues even lightly looking away from the other as she spoke.

“I wish I could stop... but he’s just... there’s something about him that I can’t say no to, stay away from even...”

“But Cloe, you shouldn’t let him treat you like that, you’re too... you need to stop being so naive!”

Of course, it would be difficult for Cloe to toughen her shell, to strengthen her demeanour, but Jade really missed the wide-eyed and bubbly girl she knew before. Jade cherished her company, she loved the girl to pieces, but her heart proceeded to shatter when seeing her in such a miserable state. Cameron was merely poison in Jade’s opinion, but Cloe could never see that. Cloe was far too gullible, as Jade believed.

“How about we play a game of soccer? What about watching an action thriller movie with a dish of Thai curry? They’re all your favourite things; maybe doing something you love might cheer you up?”

Letting out a little huff in response to Jade, Cloe turned her head in order to face the dark-haired female, lazily looking up with a dull expression painted upon her features. Even the mere mention of her favourite things never seemed to faze her in this moment; Cloe was still in tears nonetheless.

“It will get better, you know...” Jade muttered, still frowning as she held Cloe within her arms, holding her a little tighter this time. “You should never let a guy break your heart... you’re too beautiful for that...”

“...I am?”

“Yes, Angel, you are!”

“...Thanks, I guess...” Cloe smiled somewhat, she was truly grateful for Jade’s compliment.

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