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Oh My Gosh

By Arisa89

Drama / Romance

Chapter 1 Last night

Shin Minah opened her eyes slightly and say “where am I?” She closed her eyes again, she’s too exhausted. Her throat was dry, and her head felt light.
~flashback~
The music pound so loud, people danced and screamed. I sat with Henry and the other guy ( so ji sub, sunghoon and gyuwoon). We play drinking games, but at that point everyone was buzzed already.
Shin Minah drink 30 shot, everyone was laughing and screaming. Minah slowly began to down the shots, the more She drank, the less my mind though. Her vision blurred and She felt her whole body fall loosely. all she heard was noise. no words nothing made sense.
“So ji sub!!! 30 Shots!!!” They laughed and yelled

Minah looked over at so ji sub taking his shots
“since when did he sit next to me?, Where’s Henry anyway?” Minah say and suddenly she fell over onto So ji sub lap. every one laughing, so ji sub helped me up
“You two are to drunk just go to bed upstairs.” Sunghoon say and hiccups
“He’s clearly drunk too and he’s telling me I’m drunk???” So ji sub complaint
“Here I’ll help you to a temporary room upstairs.” So ji sub said with his eyes barely opened also
“it’s okay, I can” Minah said getting up but suddenly I fell backwards onto him.
Just then he pulled me over and I was on his back, I smiled and put my head down on his back suddenly I dozed off.
~End of Flash back~

Minah feel thirsty, then she go to the fridge to grab some water. She suddenly feel a bit cold, then she noticed
“why am I not wearing clothes? !?” Minah scream
“What wrongs?” Ask So ji sub who ran from bathroom only wearing a towel
“Ahhhh” Minah scream even more louder
So ji sub has to cover Minah’s mouth so the other won’t hear it.
“Why you are naked?!” Ask So ji sub shock
“Why ask me? Ask yourself mister” Minah say then grab a blanket to cover her body
“I can’t remember anything” so ji sub say
“Please try to remember it again, nothing happen right?!” Minah say in panic
" after i take you upstairs, i can’t remember all. I guess something did happen ” so ji sub say while scratch his head that its not itchy

~Flash back~
So ji sub sat down on the bed by her side. He never knew how she felt until just now when she told me.
“Oppa” Minah said to me and leaned her head on my shoulder

So ji sub turned and looked at her, she looks so lovely. Ji sub pulled her chin towards his face and kissed her, their lips touched and it was like they longed to touch. His right hand clasped her left hand and his left hand began to undress her as his right hand undressed me.
~End of flashback~

“Andwae!!, how can i explain to woo bin” Minah say

“Mianhae, i’ll help you to explain it to woo bin” so ji sub say

We quietly and quickly got dress, there was air of awkwardness and silences. We avoided eachother’s eye’s.
“Let’s just forget about this, let’s pretend like it was a dream, okay?” Minah said
“Ok” so ji sub replied
She then left not looking back. So ji sub sat quiet in that room and ran both my hands through his hair. “Sighing, ugh what did we talk about last night. He shook his head, it’s okay because like she said just a dream” so ji sub say
He got up and left. Weeks after we’d go out with the other guy, we avoid eye contact with with each other and they seems not to notice.
Two and a half weeks later, minah came to find so ji sub
“Hi” Minah say to one of the girl in the building
“Can i help you?” Ask the girl
“I need to talk to so ji sub alone about something. ” Minah say
“Wait here,i’ll call so ji sub first” the girl say
Then so ji sub come, and Minah look a bit down.
“Can we talk some where in private? ” Minah ask so ji sub
He nodded and followed her out to her car, we go in and lock the car door.
“something hasn’t been right and I need to tell you. ” Minah said trying not to cry or shake in nervousness
" i’ve been so busy these days that I totally forgot about what happened that day. But some week ago, in the dorms I suddenly feel so cold all the time.and I can’t seem to want to eat anything because it all smells weird suddenly, but worse of all the other day I called my mom and she yelled at me about something, she said she had a pregnancy dream.” Minah say
“So your mom is having a baby?” he asked clueless
“My mom can’t have kids any more. ” she hinted at him angrily
“Then you have nothing to worry about. ” he smiled at me still clueless
“No, I think I am pregnant” she mumbled
“Pregnant!?!” he exclaimed in shock

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