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Leaving, Then Coming Back, But Changed

By WritingtheWeird

Romance / Drama

Chapter 1

(Bella's POV.)

(Five years old.)

"Alice! Edward! You know I can't run fast! Ahhhhh!" I screamed as I tripped. I was over at Edward and Alice's house to play there brother and sister. They're my best friends.

Before I hit the ground, I felt two strong little arms grab me. I turned around to see Edward holding me.

I stood up and blushed.

I do those two things a lot. Tripping and blushing.

"Thanks Edward." I told him.

He didn't say anything. All he did was smile my favorite crooked smile. This made me blush more.

"You two make a cute couple!" Alice yelled beside us. That was when I noticed Edward still had his arm around me.

"Edward, I'm standing up now."

"Sorry." He said while letting go.

"Come on Bella! It's time to go home!" My mom, Renee, yelled.

I turned around glumly to my two best friends.

"I have to go home. I'll see you guys tomorrow!" I yelled.

"See ya, Bella!" They yelled back.

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