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FREEDOM

By bgjsl33thor

Poetry

Chapter 1

Freedom is just what we have not conquered yet....

Freedom is our mirage for everyday...Freedom is the untouchable one , the one that is still untamed....

Freedom is our crystal cage , where we have a fake feeling of Liberty...

Freedon is the bird flying over us , we wish to be one day .....

Freedom is to have the memory of being born free...

Freedom is to escape anywhere , where nothing could defeat us....

Freedom is our deepest dream to come true.....

Freedom is our lost paradise to be found at any cost ....


Freedom is not a war to conquer a weak peace....

Freedom is not to be a slave in order to pay it.....


Freedom is looking somewhere upthere in a sprakling night , fulfilled with wish stars...

Freedom is to choose what we really desire....

Freedom brings us Peace and the sensation of an amazing life , right on the corner...

That is why I decided to be a writer , a writer known as The Life Writer......

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Soaring_Soul: I'll do the same thing I did with your haikus for your poems and list them by chapter.I Am More - That was so deep and beautiful. You really brought out strong emotions in this piece, it made me smile while almost wanting to cry!A Part of Me - Very emotional, you can easily see the feeling in the...

Laraine Smith: My only suggestion on the grammar is to use www.grammarcheck.net. I have it bookmarked on Google Chrome. I see myself in the determination in this beautiful story! I have Cerebral Palsy, and I have dreams that I have been working hard for, too! The humor made me laugh!

Alex Rushmer: Honestly, poetry is not really my thing, and I don't have a lot of feedback that I can give. However, I thought that this was written powerfully in a way that affects the reader. Just don't mistake depressing for being the same as deep. You can have one without the other. This is only my opinion,...

Laraine Smith: I was also a victim of verbal, physical, and sexual abuse by my father. One time, he threatened to beat me with a belt. This story enabled me to talk about it. Thank you. :)

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