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FREEDOM

By bgjsl33thor

Poetry

Chapter 1

Freedom is just what we have not conquered yet....

Freedom is our mirage for everyday...Freedom is the untouchable one , the one that is still untamed....

Freedom is our crystal cage , where we have a fake feeling of Liberty...

Freedon is the bird flying over us , we wish to be one day .....

Freedom is to have the memory of being born free...

Freedom is to escape anywhere , where nothing could defeat us....

Freedom is our deepest dream to come true.....

Freedom is our lost paradise to be found at any cost ....


Freedom is not a war to conquer a weak peace....

Freedom is not to be a slave in order to pay it.....


Freedom is looking somewhere upthere in a sprakling night , fulfilled with wish stars...

Freedom is to choose what we really desire....

Freedom brings us Peace and the sensation of an amazing life , right on the corner...

That is why I decided to be a writer , a writer known as The Life Writer......

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