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Golden eyes


In a world where your fate is decided by your eye color, a boy was born with Golden eyes. The rarest color of eyes, meaning a life of riches and luxury. But will he ever really be truly happy?

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A world where your eye color decides your fate. A boy was born with golden eyes.

He attracted the eye of many others, golden eyes were rare, for they meant a life full of luxury and riches.
The people around him were often jealous. They had common colored eyes, meaning common lives. He often got bullied, taunted, made fun of, and picked on.

"Mother, this doesn't seem like my fate."
"Don't worry Fundy, it'll be better, I promise,"
"You say this every time Mother, nothing is getting better."
"If it doesn't, I'll make it better... I have news Fundy,"
She turned, looking at Fundy, "We're- we're moving to LA..."
"But Mother this- this is my home, we can't just l-leave Mother-!"
"Your father had a business opportunity, we have to go."
Fundy simply said nothing, and ran out of the room. Even if mostly everyone wasn't really nice to him, he had grown up here.
Worse, more people would know of his golden eyes. People could go after him, for the riches in his fate...

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FictionalChris: I really enjoyed this book, and look forward to more. (Already reading the next) The slight errors here and there weren't enough to pull me from the story to badly, and the style is fine. As with any author creating work at a fast pace to post, typos and whatever is easy to overlook. What has bee...

Leyla-Claude: Shorter than the other two books but I like how the story is coming together nicely. Looking forward to book 4

Tiffany: Omg ...if you enjoy reading short hot stories that gets you really needing to bring your toys out and play then this is perfect for you it's amazing!!! I really LOVED reading this!! Ty for letting us read your marvelous amazing story!!!

Annigrace: Ok the novel is great

Sara: A great story! I look forward to more chapters and updates to this one.

jsmoore18: Please add more chapters I know you currently have 3 books in progress and I can't wait to see where they all go. So far I have read all your books out on this site and on storysome.

vanja: Nice style, this is the second book that i am reading and i like it.

chrissyparadis: I really liked the plot of this book. I love MC stories!

Gladys: I really enjoy this story more I read.

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