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The Devil within


โ›๐ˆ'๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐œ๐š๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ž ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ญ๐ก๐ž ๐ฆ๐จ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฉ๐š๐ข๐ง ๐ž๐ฏ๐ž๐ซ..๐›๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ž ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ญ๐ก๐ž ๐›๐ž๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ž๐š๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ž ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฅ๐ข๐Ÿ๐ž... โœ Grayce Evans, bitten by her father with demon blood gets kidnapped by her fathers enemies..only to find out that she was kidnapped by a pure demon, Jeon Jungkook, a demon with many dark secrets. Along her way she meets vampires, werewolf's and more demons, but when Grayce finds out that she's marrying Jungkook, will she be able to get her demon senses in check before the wedding, along with the drama surrounding her? Read the story to find out.

Romance / Mystery
Destiney Johnson
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Ji-Hoo heard loud banging at the door, He immediately got up and looked outside to see two black vans, and there he saw the guy he knew was going to kill him..Jeon Win-Son. "Kara!! Get up!!" Ji-Hoo anxiously said, Shaking his wife out of her sleep. His wife Kara Evans, Woke up concerned yet worried "Hm? Honey what's wrong?" "He's here..I need you to get Grayce and leave." He stated, Helping his wife get up and out of the bed. "What do you mean he's here??" Kara Questioned, With a worried look on her face. "Win-Son, He's here to kill me...I didn't pay the debt in time."

Kara's tired eyes filled up with tears as she looked at her husband, who was on the verge of tears. "I need you, to get Grayce..so I can give her what I can't lose."

Kara nodded her head, rushing to her daughters room. "Grayce, Grayce Hunny wake up.." "hm..? Mommy why are you up...?" Kara tried her best not to break down and cry, knowing she needed to stay strong at this moment. "Mommy can't tell you right now, but we need to go now." Kara cried, picking up her daughter and putting her shoes on as fast as she could, Kara raced downstairs, where Joon was at. "Go to the back door, I'll meet you there in a second." Ji-Hoo said, running to the front door as Kara went to the back with Grayce. "You can't hide from me Evans!!! You didn't pay the debt, and now you will meet your death you bastard!!" Win-Son raged out, Banging on the door. Ji-Hoo ran to the back door, the front door crashed open..Revealing Win-Son. Ji-Hoo Gently grabbed Grayce's wrist, Looking at it..All of a sudden his eyes became blazing orange, Grayce's Vains became Orange as well. "This is gonna hurt for a quick second ok Sweetie..?" "Mhm..Ok dad.." Ji-Hoo Bit into Grayce's wrist, causing Grayce to cry out in pain. Ji-Hoo Then let go of Grayce's wrist and stopped biting her. He kissed her bite wound gently, and then kissed his wife's forehead. Ji-Hoo stood up, smiling at his family...before a knife was thrown at his back, and going inside of him. Dark red blood came out of his mouth before coughing it up as tears went down his face. He fell to the ground, eyes rolling into the back of his head, blood spilling out onto the floor. "Daddy!!!" Grayce cried out, looking at her father's figure on the floor. Kara cried as she picked up her daughter, looking at her bit mark.

"I'm sorry it had to end this way..."
Ji-Hoo uttered before he died on the cold floor....
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