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That One Girl


Who knew that there would be a certain person that would be able to change his ways just by befriending him.

Fantasy / Romance
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The First Day

Y/n Longbottom, Mr and Mrs Longbottoms sweet babygirl was now getting off the train with her brother, Neville Longbottom. Neville always felt protective towards his sister, rarely left her alone, so he thought why change that now.

"First years, this way to the boats, come on now" A giant man yells over the load conversations of the kids. Neville grabs his sister's hand and brings up to the boats where he carefully makes sure she gets on safely and is seated comfortably. The young witch is instantly amazed with the glowing castle in front of her, she is snapped out of the trance when she feels a hand on her shoulder.

"You okay there y/n/n you seem too quiet" asks her brother

"I'm okay Neville" she reassures

Soon they arrive at the castle and climb up the stairs, once they reach the top she sees a woman in emeral robes and a pointy hat.

"Welcome to Hogwarts, now in a few moments you will pass threw these doors and join your classmates but before you take your seats you must be sorted into your houses. There are Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin, now while your here your house will be like your family. Your triumphs will earn you points any rule breaking and you will lose points, at the end of the year the house with the most points is awarded the house cup-"


Neville runs up a couple of steps when he sees his pet frog by the feet of the professor, catching the frog in his hands he looks up earning a glare from the old witch, "sorry" he soon returns to his spot next to his sister.

"Neville didn't gran say to be more careful with Trevor" the young witch whispers to her brother

"I know its just that I had lost him on the train and suddenly he shows up here I can't just leave him" he replies while petting the frog.

"The sorting ceremony will begin momentarily" and after that the professor leaves, leaving the children on the steps staring straight ahead until a voice speaks up.

"Its true then, what they're saying on the train, Harry Potter has come to Hogwarts" Y/n then turns her attention to the voice, it's a boy with nice blonde hair commed neatly to the side, and grey-ish blue-ish eyes, in her mind he is most beautiful person she has ever laid eyes on but her thoughts are interrupted by her brother whispering to her

"Harry Potter, merlin did you hear that y/n/n" says her brother shocked about the news, once she is snapped back into reality she can't help but wonder 'am I really going to school with the Harry Potter'.

"This is Crabbe, Goyle and I'm Malfoy, Draco Malfoy" the blonde boy nods his head to the two boys behind him, then moves closer to the boy with raven hair and glasses only to be stopped when the boy beside him with ginger hair snorts. That catches the attention of the Malfoy kid

"Think my names funny don't you, no need to ask for yours, red hair and a hand me down robe, you must be a Weasley" in Y/n's mind she thought "that was rude, but he could just be having a bad day" but on the other hand Neville thought he was not good to befriend.

"You will soon find out some wizarding families are better than others Potter, you don't want to go around making friends with the wrong sort, I can help you there" he then extends his hand only to soon be rejected by the boy with glasses

"I think I can tell the wrong sort for myself thanks" the blonde boy is left there dumbfounded by the reply of the boy across him until he feels a tap on his shoulder, it's the professor.

While the young boy makes his way back to the two goons that have been following him since the train he sees a girl, y/c/h hair in pigtails, y/e/c eyes, and a confused expression on her face. He thinks she is beautiful but continues to stand in between his two bodyguards still angry that he couldn't make friends with Harry Potter.

"We're ready for you now, follow me" and leads the body of kids into the big golden doors

Y/n was simply enchanted by the ceiling

"Its not real you know, the ceiling, it's just bewitched to make it look like the night sky. I read about it in Hogwarts A History" says a bushy haired girl walking beside her

"I think it's interesting how much we can do with magic, im Y/n Longbottom" she turns her head to get a good look at the girl.

"Hermione Granger, it's a pleasure to meet you I hope we can be friends"

"Me too"

Staring ahead she sees a old hat sitting on a stool and behind it a large table filled with teachers. When they reach the front of the hall the professor goes to stand in front

"Wait along here please, now, before we begin professor Dumbledore would like to say a few words" behind the woman y/n can see an old man sit up from his chair at the long table.

"I have a few start of term notices I wish to announce, first year's please note that the Dark Forest is strictly forbidden to all students, also our caretaker, Mr.Filtch, has asked me to remind that the 3rd floor corridor, on the right hand side is out of bounds to everyone who does not wish to die a most painful death, thank you".

Y/n turns to look at her brothers confused face but then puts a reassuring hand on his shoulder and sends him a warm smile

"Now when I call your name you will come forth, I shall place the sorting hat on your head and you will be sorted into your houses" Professor McGonagall then holds up a piece of parchment

"Hermione Granger"

Y/n can see that the young witch is nervous so when she sat on the stool she sent a sweet smile her way

"Ahh, right there, hmm right...okay..GRYFFINDOR!!"

The Gryffindor table erupted with cheers and claps as the bushy haired girl made her way to the table

"Draco Malfoy"

That name made y/n attention turn back to the stool as she saw the boy make his way to the stool and sit

The hat barely touches his head and yells


As the the crowd of first year's gets smaller y/n can't help but wonder what house is she going to be. Seeing her brother be sorted into Gryffindor made her anxious and nervous, she didn't want to get separated from her brother but her thoughts were interrupted by a voice

"Y/N Longbottom"


Hello everyone I hope you liked the first chapters feel free to correct me on any of my mistakes (it is really late but I had an idea so I started writing) or comment

I just have one teensie favor to ask from all my reader please do not attack anyone from the story because the behavior will go along with the story in the future

Anyways thanks for reading and I will try to post the next chapter tomorrow, feel free to vote and comment
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