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It's 2013 Justin Bieber is the biggest pop star on the planet and he contacted Hugh Hefner about bringing his dad to visit The Playboy Mansion just spend the day hanging out enjoying time out of the public eye. The day before they were supposed to arrive at the mansion I was trying to find something to wear and out of all the clothes in my huge closet I couldn’t find the perfect outfit.
So I decided to go shopping with a few of the other girls to find something it just so happens there is a party at the mansion tomorrow while their visiting. After hours of shopping I finally picked something.
I rushed home and went to bed early ensuring I wasn’t going to be tired the next day beauty sleep is key.
I woke up bright and early giving myself enough time to get ready before Justin and his father arrived. I took a shower and got dressed then I applied my makeup and did my hair, with just an hour before they would be here I started getting super nervous.
I didn’t want to freak out when he arrived because stars come here to get away from all the paparazzi and craziness. Hef known by most as Hugh Hefner called all of us girls down stairs so we could greet Justin and Jeremy as they arrived.
I was up front because I was one of Hef’s girlfriends the other girls just lived there. The gates buzzer went off security buzzed open the gates and we watched from the window waiting for them to pull up the long driveway,then we saw it a white Ferrari pulled in and came to a stop we stood there in a line next to Hef.
The doorbell rang and Hef opened the door, all the girls said hello and hugged them both. I wanted to keep my cool and not let him know that inside I was screaming like a 5 year old who just received a pony. “Hello it’s very nice to meet you”I said as I hugged Justin and Jeremy.
So I was totally freaking out on the inside as I hugged Justin but of course I couldn’t let him know that. I hugged Jeremy and said “Hello welcome to the Playboy Mansion”. Hef then asked me to show them around the house and then take them to the game room. Of course I’d be the one to get asked to show them around not that I don’t want to I’m just freaking out.
“Okay first we will look down here then we will go upstairs.” “Sounds great” Justin said. The sound of his voice made me want to melt but I kept cool. “The mansion has 22 rooms including a wine cellar, a game room, a zoo and aviary and a related pet cemetery, tennis courts, a waterfall and a swimming pool area including a patio and barbecue area, a grotto, a sauna and a bathhouse.” I tell them "You sound like a tour guide." Justin said laughing "I've done this a few times." I said with a smile after we checkout a few rooms I take them to the game house which is more like a game house.
We walk through the front entrance of the game room there is a pool table in the center there are tons of vintage and modern arcade games, pinball machines, player piano, jukebox, television, stereo, and couch that line the walls of the house.
The game house has two wings. Left is a room with a soft cushioned floor, mirrors all around, television. There is a restroom with a shower. The right wing of the game house has a smaller restroom and entrance to a bedroom. This bedroom is connected to another bedroom, which has an exit to the rear backyard of the game house. The game house has a backyard with lounge chairs, and gates on either side. I told them about all the things the game room had to offer they listened closely as I explained every perk.
As soon as I finished my speech Justin ran around and played almost every game in the house he and Jeremy played a couple games of pool. "I'm going to go change into my bathing suit and I'll take you guys to the pool next." I said to him "Okay sounds good." He said not taking his eyes off the game.
I took a deep breath as I wlaked back to the house "Alright Aaliyah calm down." I said to myself I quickly ran ustairs and changed then I went back out to the game house.
I walk in to see Justin playing Pac-Man while his dad is playing a game of Backgammon with Hef. “Ready to go to the pool?” I ask "I'll bring him out after we finish this game." Hef said I nodded and walked over to Justin "Ready?" I asked
“Yeah lets go..You look nice by the way.” He said I almost fell down he is so cute.”Thank You!” I said. We walked outside the house and down the path "Wait I'll show you the zoo first since we're gonna pass it." I said walking off the path to the zoo.
Justin and I talked about all the animals I told him some of their names. Justin isn’t like other guys who by now would be staring at my body but he looked into my eyes when he spoke and I love that. "Ready for the pool?" I asked with a smile "Yeah." He said smiling back
We made it to the pool “This is amazing” He said “I know this is my favorite part of the mansion well outdoors anyway.” He takes off his shirt and shows off his perfectly sculpted body.
I couldn't help myself I just stared him up and down “See something you like?” He asked with a smirk I instantly blushed. "Oh my gosh I'm so sor..." I started to apologize next thing I know Justin picks me up over his shoulder and we both fall into the pool.
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