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The 8th Ghost: Gracie Raven Raggs

By beetransfan

Adventure / Action

Introducing Raven Nightshade

Author’s Note: Chibi Bee says “Hit it” A Chibi Reborn says “Ciao beetransfan does not own 07-Ghost, just the OC”

A 07-Ghost fanfiction

The 8th Ghost: Gracie Raven Raggs

Chapter 1: Introducing Raven Nightshade

Her eyes opened to see herself surrounded by water in a familiar giant cylinder tank with the equally familiar breathing mask on her face. Looking up she saw scientists staring down at her from their deck with a silver haired man wearing what looked like a military uniform and cap in a theme of black and dull gold standing behind them.

So I have traveled back in time,’ the young girl thought to herself. She looked back down at herself to be greeted by her 10 year old body, ’good thing I’m at the beginning of my dead life since I don’t feel a pulse in my own body’ She glanced back at the tank to see the water going down around her and saw some of the scientists and the silver haired man coming down from the deck.

When the water was drained from the tank and the mask came off, the doors opened allowing the girl to step out into the room. One of the scientists handed her a dress in a dark blue color. Putting the clothes on she saw the sliver haired man, with the amethyst eyes, walk towards her. She knew who this man was, Ayanami, her father. She was about to get her name from him and see her precious person for the first time.

“Your name is Raven Nightshade, you are my 10-year-old daughter and you are the 8th Ghost, Azrael” he said with a cold tone of voice, “you will be trained in zaiphon use, as well as your Ghost powers. Dr. Takashi has agreed to look after you while you live in this lab,” he said, gesturing to a man in a lab coat. He continued saying, “When you are 12, you will be enrolled into the military academy, where you will disguise yourself as a boy. Do I make myself clear?” He questioned, making sure she got all he was asking of her.

“My name is Raven, your daughter and the 8th Ghost, Azrael. I will be trained in zaiphon use, as well as my powers, Dr. Takashi will look after me while I live in this lab. I am to disguise myself as a boy when I am enrolled in the academy at 12, father.” She said, in a soft tone of voice. She saw Ayanami’s eyes widen in surprise at the sound of her voice, as if he didn’t think her voice would be like that of a melody. She knew that it reminded him of Eve’s whom her mother, Teito Klein, was the reincarnation of. He managed to wipe the surprise from his eyes to say.

“Good, Dr. Takashi will you take her to her room so that she can rest before meeting my subordinates,” Dr. Takashi nodded and motioned for her to follow him. She followed him down an empty hallway until he stopped at a door. Opening it he motioned for her to go in first. Stepping into the room she saw a bed, dresser, desk, and a full length mirror. Walking until she was in front of the mirror, she saw standing at what looked to be 5’1 and wearing a sleeveless dark blue dress, a pale skinned lithe girl, with dark brown hair that framed her heart-shaped face and fell to her thighs, and amethyst eyes. Look back in the mirror, she saw a light brown short haired man with green cat-like eyes, light tan skin and wearing a white lab coat over a white button up shirt with black pants and shoes.

“My name is Dr. Kano Takashi,” the man said, “I will need to get you dried off before I can let you sleep, though.” He opened the door he was in front of, with the light coming on when he opened it, to show a room with a toilet, sink, and a partially curtain covered shower/bathtub. She glanced at the clock on the dresser, seeing that it was 1 in the morning. She blinked and started to the bathroom feeling a shiver go through her body.

“Would be a g-g-g-good-d-d-d id-d-de-e-a AH-CHOO!!” she attempted to say before cutting off with a sneeze. She heard him chuckle a little at that before guiding her to sit at the edge of the tub. She looked to the sink to see that he put a change of clothes there for her. She blinked when her view was obscured by a fluffy white robe. When she got it from her face she looked questionably at the man in front of her.

“I need you to get out of that dress to dry yourself off and into the robe so I can dry your hair, we don’t want you to catch a cold after all” he explained at her look before turning his back to her. She peeled the dress off and dried herself quickly. Once she tied the robe around herself, she tapped the doctor on the shoulder to tell him it was ok to look now. He got a towel, brush, and hair dryer out to quickly dry her hair. Once that was done though he started doing something to her hair.

“I’m just braiding your hair so it doesn’t get tangled during the night. I’ll be out of your room since I would like to get some sleep before morning and you should as well” he explained as he finished the braid with a hair tie. He went out first and she followed right after, gazing at the clock she saw it was nearing 1:30 am. Glancing around the room she saw he had left, going back to the bathroom she got dressed in undergarments, shorts, and a long sleeveless shirt all in black. Shutting off the light in both the bathroom and bedroom, she crawled into bed falling asleep soon after.

AN: “Next time on Gracie Raven Raggs we will find out why she went back in time in the first place and her intro to the Black Hawks and maybe first training session! I hope you all read and review this story! Beetransfan ending transmission”

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