The Villainous Savior.


The one night you decide to take a walk to get things off your mind. No matter how hard you try to keep the fear hidden, it comes back every time. Your Captor Is cold. At first. But as time goes on, you find them getting softer.

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The Dangers Of Red.

I was taking a night walk when I heard someone scream. I stopped and stood there. I didn't do anything...nothing. Then, the screaming stopped. Immediately. I looked around slowly. I didn't see anyone. As I was facing in the direction I had come from, someone grabbed me from behind.

"Let go-"

"You scream or look at me or even try to escape, I won't think twice before putting a bullet through your brain." My Captor said. His voice sounded familiar. It was raspy, deep and a little rough. I feel like I've heard it somewhere before. He dragged me into some sort of vehicle.
"Where are you taking me?" I whispered. I could feel him tense up.
"I'm taking you where I want." Was all he said. I had no idea what he looked like. Only his voice, which now, in this moment, seemed to calm me. I had no clue as to why. The unknown vehicle came to a stop. A blindfold was put over my eyes.
"What the...?" I put my arms out and tried to feel around.
"Can you see?" He asked.
"That's a stupid question! No! I can't see!" I heard the door open. My Captor helped me out then let me go.
"This is a test of how well you will listen. Just follow my voice." I put my arms out again and listened for him. "Walk to me." I started to walk in the direction of his voice.
"Am I doing good?" As soon as I said that, I felt his chest. "Ah! Sorry! I didn't mean to do that!" I said frantically. He grabbed my hand and began pulling me. After a minute or two of walking, I was thrown to the floor.
"Stay here. Don't speak, don't move, don't take the blindfold off." He said. Then I heard a door close and lock. I laid back on the floor. It was rather soft. I sighed. Why, of all nights, did I have to take a walk?
After a while, I heard the door unlock and open. I sat up.
"Hey there." I said politely.

"Hey. Did you do as I said? " He asked. I nodded.
"I did. I knew I would die if I didn't..." I felt a hand on my face. Then the blindfold came off. That's when I saw my Captor.
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