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Alice Lost in Wonderland

By Lillie_Latham

Adventure / Fantasy


"Their death is on my hands," Alice murmured, so soft it seemed as though she hadn't spoken at all. She dropped the peridot and held her shaking hands up before her face. "I fear one day all the blood I've spilled shall coat my hands in the darkest shades of crimson."


Part One: Not the Story you Thought you Knew:

Everyone who can read believes they know her story. But they don’t truly know it, not in the slightest. They believe her a martyr, a heroine. She is Alice: the girl who prevailed. Or Alice: the Curious Girl who turned Wonderland upside down, who sent it spiraling into chaos. But people who are not Wonderlandian do not understand how Wonderland works. Not even she understands its complexity and she has lived here for quite some time. But coming here was the greatest mistake Alice ever made. That is the one thing that wretched story got right.

But to tell you the true story, to tell you of her trials and her tribulations, I must start from the beginning.

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