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Mazion Tyl: The Apprentice

By Zach Halteman (epic146)

Scifi / Adventure

Blurb

Mazion Tyl is a poor scavenger on the Forest Moon of Endor. He lives a lonely life with no parents to guide him. His only friend is a Wookie named Noss. As Salvatore, Avin Dimordo, and Karik Bane exile to Endor for training and in hiding of the First Order, they meet Mazion, and a new journey awakens.

1; Prologue

Endor really blows. For instance, I’m always getting raided by those annoying Ewoks. They keep stealing my berries and bread! It’s so aggravating. Ahem, um, anyway. The name’s Mazion. Mazion Tyl. Routine Scavenger and Wookie Whisperer. Hehe. Wookie Whisperer. Anyhow, I live here on Endor. I live in a Wookie colony. I, kinda, have no parents. They sorta left me here, then they died, so... Yeah, I’m all alone. I used to be in touch with my grandpa for a little, but he seemed to have disappeared. Well, I do have Noss. He’s my childhood friend. I met him when I was dropped off at age one. We got along quite well. And now I’m stuck here, 13 and an orphan. Sheesh. Honestly, there’s too MUCH oxygen here that the trees don’t help at all. I just hope... One day... Someone will find me, and treat me like a human, not a Wookie. Here’s hoping...


Dakarus looked out of his small hut on Endor. He had a pastry in his hand made by him. It was sort of sweet, but the sugar on Endor lacks sweetness compared to Yavin IV's.
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