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Harmony's Dawn - One Shot

By Tristan McLucas

Drama / Romance

Harmony's Dawn

It was morning at last and Moe was already awake, which was nothing unusual since she always made sure to wake up as early as possible. It was the weekend at last, which meant a time to spend with her beloved Mari. Moe turned on the taps, watching the water flow into the tub, as she soon tipped a bottle of bubble foam upside down, pouring the liquid into the warm water as well. The moment she was finished, she hoisted her torso as she straightened her back, placing her hands onto her hips soon after, still clad in her nightwear as her yellow-hued eyes watched as bubbles started to appear upon the water’s surface. She was waiting for her partner, Mari, not knowing if whether or not she was awake.

Last night during Masayoshi and Gotou’s wedding party, Mari and Moe were partaking in a slow dance together to the serene melody playing in the back. It was a piece of music that Mari had kindly composed for the two grooms, and it was fortunate that the girls encouraged Gotou to even dance with Masayoshi as well. That was the moment when Moe was finally able to confess her feelings for Mari, despite that Mari already knew how she felt. However, this time was different. Mari actually listened to Moe. As for her response, it was a yes.

Mari heard her girlfriend’s footsteps tiptoe down the hallway quite early in the crack of dawn, no matter how quiet she tried to be. Moe was still able to wake Mari from her snooze nonetheless, although it was almost a miracle that Mari was never fazed by the sound. She smiled instead. Due to how early it was she assumed Moe was happy, happy about Mari’s response last night. Moe loved Mari, and Mari loved her too. She now realized just how much she truly meant it. Mari was her one true love, she was her raison d’être, and there was no reason she could live in a world without her ginger-haired beauty. Upon hearing the bathtub filling in the distance, Mari soon stretched beneath the duvet and gave a loud yawn shortly before stepping out of bed. As always she slept nude due to the night’s cool temperature, and as soon as she rose to her feet she started to quietly skulk her way to the bathroom in hope to surprise the other. As of course, Mari just knew that Moe would love to have her in there with her. Slowly now, Mari snuck up behind the other and gradually draped her arms around Moe’s love handles, even planting a gentle kiss upon her neck.

“Morning, babe...” Mari whispered into Moe’s ear, allowing her cherry-pink lips to lightly trace along her earlobe. Her right-hand delicately traced down her lithe stomach to her leg, encouraging her skin to lightly tingle with excitement. She wanted to surprise her, after all.

Moe jolted with surprise at the sudden touches along her sensitive skin, she was not expecting Mari to be up so soon. The moment she felt Mari’s nimble fingertips trace along her thigh, she felt the heat building up inside as her blood started to boil with excitement. She could feel the tingling sensation play with Mari’s fingertips, the heat bloom within her body, and Mari’s lips greet her neck within minutes. At the few touches that Mari gave, Moe could already feel a little flame of warmth bloom within her heart. She was also in love with this moment.

“O-Oh... good morning, Mari-san...” Moe muttered shyly, glancing over her shoulder towards the female embracing her from behind. Moe’s beamed cheerfully at the sight, as she soon placed her right palm over the hand which felt her leg warmly.

Moe felt in love, especially with her Flamenco Diamond. This moment was truly a miracle, as Moe believed.

Mari giggled cutely into Moe’s ear, moments before giving Moe’s waist a little squeeze with her loving embrace. Her crimson-coloured hues wandered and watched, watching Moe’s lips respond with a wide smile at Mari’s presence. Despite she gave the other a rather sexual approach, but Mari was usually a feisty deviant after all. Mari bit down onto her bottom lip as her gaze wandered towards those enticing lips of the others and Mari desperately wanted to touch them with her own.

“A nice hot bath, it sure looks comfy in there, Moe-chan. Is it okay if I join you?” Mari cooed with yet another giggle, even giving the other a little wink. If Moe responded with a yes, Mari hoped their morning together would turn into a fun and sensual moment. “...I-I’d love to spend time with you... in that way.” Mari added, with a faint colour of crimson dusting her features.

“...Actually, I was deciding whether or not to wake you up, you know? I was frightened that you might be angry at me if I did.” Moe admitted shyly, a small blush forming over her own cheekbones now. Moe was happy that Mari was there with her, even embracing her. She kept her gaze resting over her shoulder, although occasionally glancing from Mari and then towards the bathtub filling up beside them. “...I’d love to spend time with you as well, in that way. I really like... having you around.” Moe uttered the last few words in a quiet tone now.

“Aw, you’re so cute, Moe-chan!” Mari rose to the tips of her toes and quickly planted a little kiss onto Moe’s blushing cheek. Her wandering hands started to slowly explore Moe’s pyjamas, her blue onesie, adoring the feel of her body against her fingertips. After she finished giving her cheek a kiss, Mari’s lips started to travel down her neck lovingly. She felt warm and safe, especially with Moe. But, without giving Moe a chance to respond Mari soon parted from the loving embrace and then approached the bubbly tub next door, she slowly sat in and thus allowed the warm bubbly water to coat her body. “Get in babe, it’s lonely in here!”

Listening to the other’s words, Moe started to quickly undress and slip out of her blue nightwear. Moe soon followed Mari, climbing into the tub and now sitting opposite the other. Moe heaved a little sigh of contentment as she felt the warmth of the water as well as the tickling sensation of the many fragranced bubbles upon the water’s surface, all whilst her amber orbs continued to eye her girlfriend lovingly. With a little giggle escaping her lips, Moe loomed forward, enough to bravely plant a sweet kiss onto Mari’s lips. “...And you’re so beautiful, Mari-san!” Moe complimented.

It was morning at last and Moe was already awake, which was nothing unusual since she always made sure to wake up as early as possible. It was the weekend at last, which meant a time to spend with her beloved Mari. Moe turned on the taps, watching the water flow into the tub, as she soon tipped a bottle of bubble foam upside down, pouring the liquid into the warm water as well. The moment she was finished, she hoisted her torso as she straightened her back, placing her hands onto her hips soon after, still clad in her nightwear as her yellow-hued eyes watched as bubbles started to appear upon the water’s surface. She was waiting for her partner, Mari, not knowing if whether or not she was awake.

Last night during Masayoshi and Gotou’s wedding party, Mari and Moe were partaking in a slow dance together to the serene melody playing in the back. It was a piece of music that Mari had kindly composed for the two grooms, and it was fortunate that the girls encouraged Gotou to even dance with Masayoshi as well. That was the moment when Moe was finally able to confess her feelings for Mari, despite that Mari already knew how she felt. However, this time was different. Mari actually listened to Moe. As for her response, it was a yes.

Mari heard her girlfriend’s footsteps tiptoe down the hallway quite early in the crack of dawn, no matter how quiet she tried to be. Moe was still able to wake Mari from her snooze nonetheless, although it was almost a miracle that Mari was never fazed by the sound. She smiled instead. Due to how early it was she assumed Moe was happy, happy about Mari’s response last night. Moe loved Mari, and Mari loved her too. She now realized just how much she truly meant it. Mari was her one true love, she was her raison d’être, and there was no reason she could live in a world without her ginger-haired beauty. Upon hearing the bathtub filling in the distance, Mari soon stretched beneath the duvet and gave a loud yawn shortly before stepping out of bed. As always she slept nude due to the night’s cool temperature, and as soon as she rose to her feet she started to quietly skulk her way to the bathroom in hope to surprise the other. As of course, Mari just knew that Moe would love to have her in there with her. Slowly now, Mari snuck up behind the other and gradually draped her arms around Moe’s love handles, even planting a gentle kiss upon her neck.

“Morning, babe...” Mari whispered into Moe’s ear, allowing her cherry-pink lips to lightly trace along her earlobe. Her right-hand delicately traced down her lithe stomach to her leg, encouraging her skin to lightly tingle with excitement. She wanted to surprise her, after all.

Moe jolted with surprise at the sudden touches along her sensitive skin, she was not expecting Mari to be up so soon. The moment she felt Mari’s nimble fingertips trace along her thigh, she felt the heat building up inside as her blood started to boil with excitement. She could feel the tingling sensation play with Mari’s fingertips, the heat bloom within her body, and Mari’s lips greet her neck within minutes. At the few touches that Mari gave, Moe could already feel a little flame of warmth bloom within her heart. She was also in love with this moment.

“O-Oh... good morning, Mari-san...” Moe muttered shyly, glancing over her shoulder towards the female embracing her from behind. Moe’s beamed cheerfully at the sight, as she soon placed her right palm over the hand which felt her leg warmly.

Moe felt in love, especially with her Flamenco Diamond. This moment was truly a miracle, as Moe believed.

Mari giggled cutely into Moe’s ear, moments before giving Moe’s waist a little squeeze with her loving embrace. Her crimson-coloured hues wandered and watched, watching Moe’s lips respond with a wide smile at Mari’s presence. Despite she gave the other a rather sexual approach, but Mari was usually a feisty deviant after all. Mari bit down onto her bottom lip as her gaze wandered towards those enticing lips of the others and Mari desperately wanted to touch them with her own.

“A nice hot bath, it sure looks comfy in there, Moe-chan. Is it okay if I join you?” Mari cooed with yet another giggle, even giving the other a little wink. If Moe responded with a yes, Mari hoped their morning together would turn into a fun and sensual moment. “...I-I’d love to spend time with you... in that way.” Mari added, with a faint colour of crimson dusting her features.

“...Actually, I was deciding whether or not to wake you up, you know? I was frightened that you might be angry at me if I did.” Moe admitted shyly, a small blush forming over her own cheekbones now. Moe was happy that Mari was there with her, even embracing her. She kept her gaze resting over her shoulder, although occasionally glancing from Mari and then towards the bathtub filling up beside them. “...I’d love to spend time with you as well, in that way. I really like... having you around.” Moe uttered the last few words in a quiet tone now.

“Aw, you’re so cute, Moe-chan!” Mari rose to the tips of her toes and quickly planted a little kiss onto Moe’s blushing cheek. Her wandering hands started to slowly explore Moe’s pyjamas, her blue onesie, adoring the feel of her body against her fingertips. After she finished giving her cheek a kiss, Mari’s lips started to travel down her neck lovingly. She felt warm and safe, especially with Moe. But, without giving Moe a chance to respond Mari soon parted from the loving embrace and then approached the bubbly tub next door, she slowly settled in and thus allowed the warm bubbly water to coat her body. “Get in babe, it’s lonely in here!”

Listening to the other’s words, Moe started to quickly undress and slip out of her blue nightwear. Moe soon followed Mari, climbing into the tub and now sitting opposite the other. Moe heaved a little sigh of contentment as she felt the warmth of the water as well as the tickling sensation of the many fragranced bubbles upon the water’s surface, all whilst her amber orbs continued to eye her girlfriend lovingly. With a little giggle escaping her lips, Moe loomed forward, enough to bravely plant a sweet kiss onto Mari’s lips. “...And you’re so beautiful, Mari-san!” Moe complimented.

As they were both now settled into the tub, Mari simply eyed the blue-haired female opposite her. The sight of her bare figure was so sensual; Mari found it almost difficult to avert her gaze elsewhere. This moment felt perfect, both sitting in the bubbly water together. Mari found Moe’s giggles to be cute, but what happened next changed the mood of the moment almost immediately. Moe leaned against her, gifting her a soft and yet sweet kiss on the lips. Her features were still stained a bright crimson colour, although glowing more vivid during the moment of the sudden kiss. Moe kissed Mari, which actually surprised her a lot. Moe would usually shy away upon being kissed by Mari, but this time she was brave.

“M-Moe-chan...” Mari feared that Moe would soon drift away from her, Mari’s fingertips simply explored beneath the water’s surface, lightning beginning to trace along Moe’s soft knee, wishing to keep her this close. Mari was still stunned, her cherry-pink lips parting slightly with disbelief. Her heart was thumping out of her chest, either flattered or amazed. Did Moe actually surprise her with a kiss for once?

Embarrassed, her amber hues quickly wandered off to one side as she lightly bit down onto her lower lip with worry, now fearing that she may have ruined the moment just by simply taking advantage. “I-I’m sorry, Mari... I just couldn’t resist!” Moe whispered frantically, flushed with embarrassment. She giggled nervously, moments before facing the other once more, a look of worry painted upon her features. Her amber orbs were sparkling with a watery substance, given that she was worrying and perhaps holding back any tears that wished to escape already. Was everything all right? Was Mari all right? Moe merely hoped, beginning to mindlessly chew her bottom lip now. Moe soon flashed a nervous smile towards Mari, giggling another time. Although the soft, sudden touch upon her knee seemed comforting, knowing that it was Mari’s hand touching her, Moe felt warm inside. With that, Moe knew everything was all right; there was no need to worry. She soon placed her palm over the hand which teased her knee just gently; all until Mari caught her hand with her own, now holding onto it tightly. Mari truly loved Moe, believe it or not.

Her fingers embraced Mari’s hand to hold it lovingly, she felt Mari’s thumb gently brush along hers. Moe felt safe, she felt warm inside. Her gaze was aligned with those crimson hues, and Moe simply watched her reflection within them. The atmosphere was changing; Moe could feel Mari beginning to swoon over her the same way she was with her before. This moment felt serene, warm, it felt peaceful. Her left hand reached for her other hand, capturing it, and now tugging her much closer until there was no more breath left in between their bare bodies. A soft moan of bliss soon escaped Moe’s lips as her yellowish orbs simply scanned the wondrous female before her, eyeing those beautiful features and especially her sweet smile. The front of their bodies were now touching one another’s, pressing against each other as Moe gradually draped her arms about Mari’s torso lovingly. She wanted to keep her close to her.

“...D-Do you now understand why I asked you to... m-marry me, Mari-san?” Moe questioned the other between two breaths, whilst her amber orbs flickered, keeping her gaze fixed on the female before her. “This is how Masayoshi-kun must feel with Goto-san each day, and seeing them together at their wedding made me realize just how much I really love you, Mari-san. I want to be with you the same way they are together; I want to marry you...” Moe confessed, with a little tremble drifting through her soft tone of voice. “I realized when I heard Masayoshi-kun’s vows, I listened carefully and I couldn’t stop thinking about you. I wish to be with you... forever.”

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