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“I promise you. I will teach you everything you have to know. I have come home”.
After a few days Ulysses comes back from practice with his son and walks up the stairs and says to Telemachus, “I can’t wait to tell your mother how well you did with my weapons” said Ulysses with excitement, “I know father i cant wait earthier cause i want to tell her how i'm just like you, i'm your twin, hahaha” said Telemachus with laughter. Finally as they reached the top of the stairs Ulysses opens the door and sees his wife lying there on the edge of the bed dead but shes still alive for now. Ulysses runs to Penelope and she whispers, “i love you so very much keep Telemachus safe for me please.”, says Penelope with tears filled with sadness. “ i will, i will, who did this too you” says Ulysses with anger.
“It was I Elpenor who did this to your beloved, you have struck me my brother and this is your punishment, I will now send you to the future along with your son hahaha”. So then Elpenor sent down a god and he transported Ulysses and his son Telemachus to the future in the timeline of 2016.
“Were are we, and what are all those things moving in the road” said Telemachus in confusion, “This is the future my son i don't know what anything is now” said Ulysses wondering what he should do. So Ulysses and Telemachus went to look around and understand there unusual surroundings that they have encountered. Later that Day they walked up to a girl and asked the girls name and she said “my name is Penelope Marie Erizel” said politely, Ulysses stared at her and remembers his wife named that but he knew it wasn't her. So Ulysses asked, “may we have a few pieces of paper that u guys think that are so important that you hold in your bags” said Ulysses, “you mean money ha ha, Sure how much would u like?” said the girl laughing “ we would like 1,000 please”, “well since i'm rich i mine as well give it away for someone in need, and that someone is dressed like the B.Cs ha ha here you go.”
“Thank you so very much my dear my love and peace be with you” said Ulysses very happy.“U mm OK sure” says the girl in confusion. After the got the money from the girl they see another girl that looks so familiar to them but they just don't know who it is, so the girl started to walk up to them and said, “Ulysses and Telemachus what are u doing here? your suppose to be in your timeline” says the girl Sequoya with confusion. “How do you know our names? And Elpenor sent us here for revenge.” said Ulysses with anger and slight confusion, “you wont know me i was the unknown god in Ithaca i kept myself a secret, And if you are trying to find your way back with money your wrong let me help you on your journey.” says Sequoya happy. “Shall it be lets go before it gets dark” ”silly its already dark if you haven't notice there is light everywhere to make it seem day and its not the fire kind of light its the futures kind of light hahaha”. So they went on a journey to find a way back to Ithaca in there time which then they realized that Elpenor didn't exist cause it was the future and there was no such thing as gods.
Telemachus, Ulysses, and Sequoya were walking for hours and hours and they finally ended up at a weird suspicious store, “this looks like some kind of voodoo store which has magic, this might be able to send you two back” so as they walk in the door Ulysses saw Penelope Marie Erizel and he froze and as he looked into her eyes he knew that she would be able to help them go back to there time. So they politely asked and they did so they all went back in there own timeline and Ulysses saw his wife again.
But will he see her again when the whole incident will he still meet those wonderful girls and understand the future again and see whats coming in his men's life and whats coming to the world you will find out in the next chapter.
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