GUARDIAN OF THE PARADISE

Summary

Peep in to know how the LOVE STORY of MANAN completed fighting against all odds of HISTORIC ERA, EQUALITY, HUMANITY, DEATH and LOVE. What would you do if you get to know that all the DEMONIC creatures of the WORLD are REAL?

Genre:
Romance / Mystery
Author:
_Divaaa_
Status:
Ongoing
Chapters:
2
Rating:
n/a
Age Rating:
16+

Prologue..

Hello Everyone!!!

This is my first ever story here.
I have been reading stories from past 5 6 years. Earlier it was on Armaan-Riddhima (DILL MILL GAYYE) and now it's one and only MANAN aka Manik-Nandini (KAISI YEH YAARIYAN)

I am giving it a shot, Hope you like it!!

In case of disliking and reviews, please feel free to ping or comment.

So here is the prologue...

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"I don't know what to do Rajaji" she said sobbing.
"Don't worry Rani sahiba, we'll figure out something. I won't let anyone take you away from me" he said assuring her.
He definitely was terrified but never showed on his face and hugged his Rani sahiba out of helplessness and fear to lose his only love.




"I am sorry Your Highness, but you cannot keep this him"
"Mantriji!!! Don't forget to whom you are talking"
"Kshama, Your Highness!! You can kill me with my own sword, but I can't let this happen. We don't know from where he came, whose blood does..."
"How dare you talk like this about your Yuvraj" shouting she put her KHANJAR on his neck




hahahahahahah.....Don't
Don't Yuvraj...Hahahahahahha Please......
"No..First call me by my name" he said tickling her
"no, this is ag..against the rul....hahahahahahahaha"
"I make the rules"




"Maa sa why I can't go out and play"
"Yuvraj it's getting dard, you can play in the garden attached to your Kaksh" (room)
"But Maa sa I want to go and play with Nandini, she is playing with Cabira..I don't like it"




"Nandini, let's not go out, Maa sahib has asked not to go that way"
"Yuvraj it's just the forget, nothing new for me..Don't be so afraid, just few meters then we will come back.
"No Nandini! I can't go against Maa sahib"




"Pitashri humne kuch dekha vahan"
"What did you saw Yuvraj"
" I don't know what was that, but... but I am scared.. Humein darrr lag raha hai. Hum aaj apke aur Maa sahib ke Kaksh mein soyenge apke sath"






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Well that's all for now..

Do let me know you liked the prologue or not...

Should I continue...

I have been here for so long so I am not gonna write all the stuff for Silent readers, plz click star button, vote targets for new chapters BUT...
I AM DEFINATELY GONNA ASK YOU TO SHARE YOUR REVIEWS AS I WANNA KNOW YOU LIKING THE STORY OR NOT. WHAT NEEDS TO BE IMPROVED. WHAT CHANGES NEED TO BE MADE. AND TRUST ME IT BOOST UP A LOT OF CONFIDENCE.

So ya share your views!!!!!

Till then..
Stay Safe, Stay Healthy.

Love
Diva❤
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