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For the love of family

By Safire

Romance

Chapter 1

I was laying on my bed when an owl flew into my window. I got up and opened the window. The owl flew in an landed on my bed. I closed the window and went over to the owl. The owl dropped a letter from its beak and tried to claw it open. I grabbed the letter before the owl ripped it to shreds. I opened the letter and smiled. It was the letter I had been waiting for since I was five. It was my Hogwarts acceptance letter and list of supplies. I went over to my desk and pulled out the owl treats I had. The owl came over and ate them. When it was done eating I opened the window.

Once the owl left I ran down stairs to mummy. "Mummy! Mummy! I just got my acceptance letter." I screamed while jumping up and down. "Bella dear that is wonderful. We will go get your supplies tomorrow. Now off to bed with you." "Yes mummy. Night love you." I called going to my room. When I got there I noticed it was cleaner ten when I had went down stairs. Ignoring that fact I laid down and fell into a Fantastic dream.

I was at the playground of the muggle school I had went to. I was sitting by the fence alone because no one liked me. "Why are you always sitting alone?" asked someone. I looked around for the person and found a boy with platinum blonde hair on the other side of the fence. " I am an outcast. That is why I am always alone." I replied. "Oh! That is just sad. Want to be my friend?" He said. "Sure." I replied before going back to class. After that I waited weeks by that fence for him but he never came back.

I woke up sweating from that dream. "Mum! Mum!" I yelled. She came running in. "Mum I had a dream about the boy from my past. Do you think I will see him again?" "Bella dear, I don't know the answer to that. If you do please be cautious of him ." "I will mummy. Now I am going back to sleep." I said falling asleep.

"Belladonna Safire Black get your lazy butt up or you won't have time to get ready." "I am up now. Will you please bring me my breakfast to my room." I yelled down the stairs. I jumped into the shower and used my favorite bath scent. When I was done the bathroom smelt like vanilla and roses. I dried off and but on my robe before walking to my closet and pulling on my outfit of the day. The outfit was a blood red tank top with black lace, ripped black skinny jeans, and blood red combat boots. When that was done I grabbed my hooded cloak and walked over to my table by the window.

Just as I sat down my mum walked in. When to food was placed on the table mum sat down. "Bella dear I am letting Professor Snape take you to get your supplies, because of how people act around me." "Okay mum! Do you know when he will be here?" "That I do not know." On that note we ate breakfast. When we were done Snape apperared in my room.


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