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By Swyfte

Adventure / Romance

The Loveless Clan

Hello all, and welcome to the monstrosity that is my largest FanFiction project. It's over a year old now and finally, I've nearly completed it. It's undergoing a few renovations at the moment, and if any of you feel like pointing out a mistake that I've missed or haven't fixed yet, go ahead!

It began in the Clans. That was the thing that all elders could agree upon.

Namely, it began in a Clan. They were the scapegoats of the others- they were weak, small, and could never win a battle. But their leader had an idea. The seed planted itself in the cat's troubled mind, and without permission it began to grow and grow and grow until it was all the leader could think of. It consumed every waking thought and every dreaming hour.

Her name was Brightstar, and at first, her idea was more terrible than anyone could behold.

She told her Clan, We must drive the very existence of love from our ranks. No more will its loathsome hold weaken us.

At first it seemed their beloved leader had gone mad. But the more the thought about it, the more reasonable it became. Love made mousehearts of them all. Without it they would be strong; they would feel no pain. The perfect warriors. Love was a smog hanging thick and caustic above their heads, and they were fools, stumbling blind. Brightstar only wanted to lead them to the light.

They proposed the idea at the next Gathering. The other Clans scoffed.

Impossible, they called it. Folly. They ridiculed Brightstar and her Clan, her preposterous plan that was doomed to fail before it could even begin. They laughed, and went on their way without even considering trialling Brightstar's idea. Her Clan was shocked. It was a brilliant idea, and they had paid it no more than a moment or two heed.

The Clan hardened their hearts, and left their old territory to find a better, richer place, which they could claim all for themselves. After much travel and cold, hungry nights, the perfect place was found and they created their Utopian Clan. Love was expelled from their midst; they labelled it as an anomaly, a disease. They forbade it. The penalty was death. She-kits were raised on one side of the camp, toms another. Contact between the two sexes was forbidden a lot of things were. Until they were matched with their pair, neither side had anything to do with each other. They were renamed; they discarded their old, soft name and replaced it with PureClan.

They found it fitting, and to match, they fashioned themselves new lore and laws.

The warrior code was extended.

A warrior that falls in love faces the punishment of exile or death.

A warrior that displays signs of the disease faces the punishment of exile or death.

Sympathizers of love face the punishment of exile or death.

Resistors of the warrior code and all that it stands for face the punishment of exile or death.

For seasons the dynasty of the loveless Clan continued. Love was scarce, but all the efforts to eliminate it had failed. The most tenacious of diseases, they found, have a way of resisting the cure.

Cats Of PureClan:

Leader- Morningstar: dark golden she-cat, tawny dapples

Deputy- Iceface: icy gray tom with thin grey flecks.

Male medicine cat- Sorrelstorm: ginger tom with darker streaks

Female medicine cat- Specklefrost: speckled brown she-cat with wide blue eyes

Apprentice- Sparkpaw

Warriors (male)-

Fussyfur: spiky-furred grey tabby tom

Apprentice- Sleetpaw

Coldbone: grey tom with erratic pale stripes

Tallstorm: tall black tom with almond-shaped yellow eyes

Gorsespots: ginger tabby tom with white legs, belly and chin

Thornstreak: dark brown tabby tom with tufted tail

Sedgewing: cream tom with faint brown patches

Waterstripe: pale marbled silver tabby tom

Tornear: large, scarred brown tom

Warriors (female)-

Fallenfeather: light sorrel tabby she-cat

Tawnypetal: cream tabby she-cat with narrow amber eyes

Apprentice- Swanpaw

Shimmerleaf: black-and-white she-cat with pale blue eyes

Redsong: reddish overo she-cat

Meadowmist: white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentices (male)-

Sleetpaw: pale grey tom with blue-grey patches

Apprentices (female)-

Sparkpaw: sandy-ginger she-cat

Swanpaw: slim white she-cat with black paws, muzzle and tail-tip

Queens-

Embertooth: wiry black she-cat, paired to Thornstreak (kits- Sablekit: thin black she-cat with tufted ears; Pepperkit: dark tabby tom with white chest and bold black stripes)

Littlefern: pale creamy fawn she-cat with brown rosary spots, paired to Fussyfur (Smokekit: dark grey tom with subtle leg striping; Slatekit: pale grey tabby tom with gold eyes; Nettlekit: dappled fawn she-kit; Rainkit: dappled grey she-cat)

Crookedflower: small tortoiseshell she-cat, paired to Iceface (kits- Fleetkit soft-furred grey tom; Jaykit: pale blue-grey she-kit)

Elders (in pairs)-

{Snowdapple: white she-cat with faint pale grey dapples

Webfoot: stocky dark grey tabby tom}

{Duskwhisker: pale brown she-cat

Crowshadow: short-tailed black tom}

Here's PureClan. Their names are a little odd, yes; they've been away from other Clans for many years and have developed a little differently.

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