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Konoha High! A Love Story? Psh! Yeah right

By MonochromaticPersona

Humor / Romance

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The following content was written years ago and I was young and weird so excuse the grammatical errors and general cringe moments of bad writing and emojis. I promise it does get better.

I was invited to this site to import this very story that has over 1000 reviews; so here it is!


'Ugh, I don't get why I have to be the exchange student! Kankuro could have been easily!' Temari thought to herself, as she was getting ready to go to Konoha High as an exchange student, from Suna Academy, for the first time. Sure, she was a little nervous, but it wasn't anything she couldn't handle. She tied the bow around her neck and tied her hair up into her usual four pigtails. 'Ok! Ready to go!' she thought and left the apartment and went off to school.

She arrived at the school gates with a sign on the wall on the right saying 'Konoha High School'. She felt the butterflies in her stomach go crazy, but she took a deep breath and clamed down and walked through the gates into the school.

She got a bit lost and found herself walking through a grassy area where no one was around. That's when she saw him. He was lying on the grass looking straight up at the sky with his hands behind his head.

'Weird guy' she thought, but it wouldn't hurt to ask him for directions, so she did.

"Eeto, hi there" she said faintly while walking up to him.

He slowly looked her way and raised his eyebrow, "Hey" he said.

"Do you know the way to the principals office?"

He sighed deeply. He sighed? What a stuck up JERK! It's only directions! It isn't like I was asking him to jump off a cliff! It's not that hard! "You know what. Don't worry about it! If it's so much trouble, I'll just go ask someone else!" Temari said with poison leaking through her words.

He looked at her weirdly in shock and grinned.

"What's so funny?" Temari demanded

"Heh, it's nothing. You must be new."

"And so what if I am?"

He paused, "Nothing." He said

Oh my god! I'm going to kill this bastard! Temari thought.

He sighed again deeply. "Keep going straight until you reach a building, then go enter the first door you see. Keep walking straight again until you reach a staircase to your left. Keep walking up them and follow the signs that say 'Principals Office' and yeah."

Temari calmed down a bit, "Thanks" she said and started to walk off.

"Hey!" he called out, "What's your name?"

Temari turned around to see him looking at her. He's kinda good looking…wait! What am I doing complimenting this stuck up jerk? "None of your business" she said and stormed off.

He just laid there for a moment and turned to look up at the sky again, "Bah! Women…so troublesome" he murmured and went back to watching the clouds.


Temari eventually found herself at the Principal's Office.

"Hello. May I help you?" the receptionist asked. There was a little sign saying 'Secretary: Shizune' on it.

"Hi. I'm the new exchange student from Suna Academy. I need to visit the Principal…?" she said politely.

"Oh, of course! Hello Subaku no Temari. Please, just walk straight into the office."

Temari gave a nod and walked right in. She saw a middle-aged lady with blonde hair in two pigtails sitting behind her desk full of paper work.

"You must be the new exchange student Subaku no Temari an I correct?"

"Ah, yes." Temari replied politely. 'Whoa, that's some body she's got their' Temari thought, 'is she really the principal?"

"Well it's nice to meet you. I'm the Principal Tsunade. Here's your timetable and a little map of the school. I'll send someone here to assist you for today and help you get around. The school grounds are quite big." Tsunade said looking straight at Temari.

"Oh no! This map should be good enough. Help is not necessary!" Temari said quickly. She didn't want some random perverted nerd sticking around her for the whole day.

"Are you sure?" Tsunade questioned raising her eyebrow.

"Yes, I'm sure." Temari said trying to sound convinced even though she already got lost in the first 2 minutes she was here.

"Ok, what ever you say." Tsunade said sighing. "You may excuse yourself now."

"Ok, thank you Tsunade-sama" Temari said and left.

Tsunade stared down at all of her paper work not leaving a single bare spot on the table left. "Where am I going to start?" Said Tsunade with a frown on her face.

Temari followed the map and eventually found her way to her form room. 'Tsunade was right, the school IS very big. Much bigger than Suna.' Temari thought to herself as she walked in. She looked around, not knowing where to sit, until a girl with pink hair and green eyes walked up to her.

"Hi there! You must be the new girl!" she said brightly.

Temari looked at her, "Yeah, that's me."

She smiled, "Hi! I'm Sakura Haruno! It's nice to meet you!"

"Hi, I'm Subaku no Temari. Nice to meet you too." She's ok I guess. I can imagine her being kind of annoying after a while, but ok.

"Do want to sit with us?" Sakura offered.

Temari thought to herself for a moment. Well why not? She had no better idea. "Sure" she said promptly and followed Sakura to the middle row. In that row seated 3 girls. One girl had her hair in two buns with a little kunai pendant around her neck. Another had lavender coloured eyes and long blue hair and looked a bit shy. While the third girl had long platinum blonde hair tied in a ponytail and blue eyes. 'A typical Barbie doll' thought Temari.

"Hey everyone! This is the new girl Subaku no Temari! Temari-san, these are my friends Tenten, Hinata and Ino." Said Sakura.

"Hey" they all chimed.

"Hey" Temari answered back and sat next to the lavender coloured eyes girl, was it Hinata, and she blushed a bit when she did.

"G-Good morning" she said really quietly.

"Mornin'" Temari said back. She seems like the really shy type, but that also means that she probably doesn't speak much, which is good. I'll probably get a long with her the most.

"Hey there Temari! I'm Ino" said the blonde girl really loudly in a high-pitched voice. "Interested in any guys our school has to offer yet?" 'Ok, I'll probably get along with her the least. She seems like the typical girly-girl with only boys and shopping on her mind' Temari thought. She automatically thought about the guy laying on the grass, but shook the thought away.

"Ino, she's only been in this school for like 5 minutes!" The girl with buns on her head said. 'I might get along with her too. She seems to have common sense' thought Temari/

"So? There's such thing as 'love at first sight' you know Tenten!" The girl named Ino said defensively.

"Anyways, what school did you come from?" asked Sakura

"Suna Academy" Temari said, not really wanting to talk about herself

"Wow! Isn't that some prestigious school?" asked Tenten

"Yeah, it's meant to be one of the top schools around."

"Then why are you here?" asked Sakura

"My fathers the principal, so apparently that's a reason for why I had to come here to 'enhance' our 'bond' with our sister school. My brother could've gone, but he said it was impossible because of his girlfriend."

"Enough of this boring school talk! So Temari, got a boyfriend yet?" Ino asked. Oh god, I'm really not going to like her.

"No I don't." Temari said casually like she didn't care. She didn't, really.

Sakura laughed, "Neither do we!"

"Sakura this isn't funny, but urgent!" Ino said in horror

Then the teacher walked in and everyone became silent. "Good Morning class! I'm your new form teach Iruka. We have a new exchange student here, Subaku no Temari. Please stand up and introduce yourself.

Oh why do they have to do this? Temari thought as she stood up and everyone started to murmur.

"Hi. My name is Subaku no Temari. I came from Suna Academy and this is my first day at Konoha High. Nice to meet you all." She heard a few comments saying, 'she's hot' and 'isn't that our prestigious sister school?' and such. She sat down quickly and roll call started.

Then they moved to their classes. Temari had double Biology with Hinata and her teacher's name was Kurenai. She was nice and didn't make her introduce herself in front of the class which was a relief!


Then finally it was recess. Temari was walking down the hall with the girls and suddenly all the girls squealed. She turned around to see five hot guys walking their way. She moved to the side with the rest of the girls. 'Oh my god, can you believe I'm acting like a sheep?' Temari thought mentally slapping herself.

"Hey Temari, meet the idols of our year level and school!" Ino squeaked in excitement. "See the guy with black hair which is spiked up at the back reading a book with glasses on? That's Sasuke. He's good at EVERYTHING! Not to mention really SEXY! The blonde guy at the front with scars like whiskers waving enthusiastically at everyone, that's Naruto. He's Sasuke's best friend and really loud, but a nice guy. The guy with the brown spiky hair on the right with the red paint on his face, that's Kiba. He's the 'Jock' of our school and is the quarter back of the football team! The serious-looking one with the long hair, lavender eyes and headband on at the back is Neji. He's the number one Martial Arts champion of the school and is also Hinata's cousin."

'No wonder they look similar.' Temari thought.

"And the last one…" Ino continued

Temari looked at the last guy. 'He looks familiar' she thought. No, wait…it's him! The guy who was laying on the grass! His hair was tied up and looked like a pineapple. He was wearing studded earrings and had his jacket slung over his shoulder with a bored and tired expression on his face.

"That's Shikamaru. Don't let his good looks fool you! He's a master genius with an IQ over 200! He's the captain and champion of the chess team and passes all of his tests with full marks and doesn't even listen or pay attention in class!"

"Over 200?" Temari said with surprise. Really? That guy who was laying on the grass? A genius?

"Yup." Said Ino feeling very proud of herself.

I watched him walk past. He looked at me and we made eye contact. Time just slowed down when our eyes locked, then he continued to walk off with his friends.

"Well, those are our idols! What do you think?" Ino said full of excitement.

"They're…good looking" Temari said losing interest in the conversation and thinking about Shikamaru.

"I know right?" Ino squealed yet again.

"Come on, let's go sit somewhere!" said Sakura.

So they went off to sit somewhere.

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