If you’ve been looking at the reviews, you know there are spelling and grammar mistakes in this story. Anyone who has been paying attention to my posts on my wall knows I’m editing one of my stories.
Once I’ve finished that story, I will edit this story. So, if you wish to avoid the monumental amount of mistakes in this story, I suggest you wait until I’ve edited this book. If you can’t wait, you will be reading at your own risk.
Just to give you an idea of how bad this book is. I wrote this when I was 14 years old. It was one of my first stories I wrote and I planned nothing, I just wrote what I wanted and didn’t give a damn if it made sense or not.
Best of luck to anyone who continues. You’re gonna need it.
I was getting ready for my best friends 16th birthday.
I put my dress on and then my heels on. I straightened my hair and put my makeup on before grabbing my purse and walking out of my bedroom.
How rude of me, my name is Naomi Grey, I’m 18 years old and I’m a part of the Dark Shadow pack, the most feared, strongest and biggest pack in the world, we’re pretty much unstoppable.
Our future alpha Damon is coming back home after being gone for 8 years. He went to some alpha boot camp/school for 8 years and now he’s back to take over the alpha position.
I walked through the pack house and went downstairs and ran into my friend. She’s the betas daughter and I’m the third in commands daughter.
“Hey girly” she said and jumped up and down excited.
“Hey Hope, excited?” I asked and she giggled while nodding her head.
“So excited, more excited than you when you had your 16th” she said.
“You know me, I’m not very interested in birthdays, especially if it’s mine” I said and she shook her head disapprovingly. I’m not excited for my birthday anymore, I used to be but after my brother and sisters left, it changed.
“Your strange” she said.
“You’ve been my friend for 12 years; you already know this” I said and she laughed.
“Hope!!!” Kelly, her mum yelled.
“I have to go” she said and ran off to her mum.
It’s now 10:30 and the party has been happening for the past 3 hours. It’s wild, there’s werewolves everywhere drinking a concentrated amount of wolfsbane. What happens when you drink wolfsbane is that it weakens your wolf making you weaker and the alcohol can make you drunk then.
The future alpha showed up and got this weird feeling when I saw him but shrugged it off.
I walked around and found Hope and we danced for about an hour together.
After a while I started to get thirsty so I walked over to the bar and ordered myself a vodka.
I had my drink and danced another 2 hours with all my friends until it was 3 o’clock. I felt tired and drunk so I stumbled up to my room but I didn’t make it because I was shoved into another room. I turned around and my eyes connected with blue eyes. My wolf was going nuts.
“Mate, mate, mate!!!” She screamed inside my head.
“Hello mate” he said and I gulped at the sound of his voice, it was so husky.
“H-Hi” I stuttered and shifted on my feet uncomfortably since he was staring at every inch of me. He walked towards me and I walked backwards until I slammed against the wall.
“You’re very very sexy” he said whispering in my ear and I shivered in pleasure from the sparks and tingles that erupted over my skin when he kissed my shoulder. He kissed under my ear and went down and along my collarbone, I moaned and he growled and unzipped my dress and before I knew it we were both undressed and he slipped inside of me.
The next morning, I woke up in the arms of my mate.
“Hello mate, I know your awake” he said and kissed my shoulder.
“Hi” I said and sat up while he kept his arms around my waist.
“You look incredible without any clothes on” he said huskily and I blushed at his words.
"I can’t believe this happened, I’m the alpha’s mate” I thought to myself. He kissed my back. I felt him sit up and move closer to me.
“I’m going to have so much fun with you” he whispered seductively and kissed my neck.
“I have to go” I said and got up quickly and slipped on my undergarments and my dress, I’m just thankful he didn’t rip anything.
“What’s your name?” He asked before I walked out.
“Naomi Grey” I said and his eyes went big but I walked out before he could respond. I walked down the hall and went into my room. I locked the door before walking into my bathroom and having a shower.
Once I was done I got out and wrapped a towel around my body and head. It was just now that I realised that I had a bad headache and I must have drunk a lot.
I walked into my walk-in wardrobe and grabbed green camouflage jeans, a cream top with the yin yang symbol on it with high heeled high tops.
I love my room, it’s great. It’s so big and comfortable. I’ve got one of the best rooms since I’m the third in commands daughter. High ranked wolves get the best things.
I shoved my phone into my back pocket and walked downstairs. I walked into the kitchen and saw my mate and his friends sitting at the table.
I grabbed a blueberry muffin and filled my thermos with coffee but before I could leave Damon’s beta yelled.
“Hey sexy legs come here” he yelled but I kept walking. “Naomi you know that it’s me talking to you” I turned around with a scowl on my face and I walked over to him.
“What do you want?”
“That’s no way to talk to the future beta” he said and all his stupid friends snickered.
“Your right Harry, it’s not but it is the way to talk to my best friends annoying big brother” I said smirking and this time he scowled.
“Listen here Naomi, I outrank you, my sisters best friend or not, I won’t hesitate to put you in your place” Harry growled at me.
“Harry, what’s 1+1?” I asked sweetly.
“2” he said confused.
“What’s 2x2?” I asked.
“4” he said rolling his eyes.
“What’s 4-4?” I asked and he looked very frustrated.
“0” he said.
“Congratulations, you just gave me the number of fucks I give” I said smirking and walked off while hearing a deadly growl and a chorus of laughter.
Today’s going to be a fun day.
I got into my car and drove to school and when I got out the entire school started whispering and pointing at me. Hope ran up to me.
“Did you embarrass my brother by any chance today?” She asked worried.
“I do it every chance I get, so yes I did it today” I said and she looked scared now. “What’s wrong Hope?”
“My brothers on a war path, apparently, he’s going to try and make hell fire ran down on you, he called me after it happened and he’s pissed Mimi, really fucking pissed” she said.
“Hey, it’s okay. I always knew I was going to hell it’s just happening earlier than I expected” I said, trying to lighten the mood but she glared at me.
“It’s not funny Naomi, I’m scared” she said whimpering.
“Calm down Hope, everything’s going to be fine” I said and she didn’t look convinced. “Relax Hope, I’m okay” I said and walked into the school building and went straight to the library.
I got the books I needed and just as I was leaving the bell went.
Ding!!! Ding!!! Ding!!!
The bell went and then the music started, they play music when we need to start heading to our lockers and then to our classes.
Well, time to go to hell.