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Faries Of The North

By BikerChickWolf9 All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Adventure

The One that Beleives

Chapter One

"Hail the fairies, the fairies of the north, may your people be safe from the storms, may your life be full of happiness and joy and peace, may your days be full of wonder and life, may we wish you love and peace"

"Hail the cool king"

"Marco" snapped Sally as she watched her annoying brother Marco dancing around like a mad man.

"Why are you talking to yourself?" Marco asked kneeling down to her snatching the book off her.

"Hey give that back"

"Fairy words?"Marco laughed.

"Its too wish the fairies good luck, if we send them love and happiness theylle wish us good luck back and bring us hapiness in our lives"

"Rubbish.."laughed Marco as Sally took the book off him."By the way Chrissie said dinners ready"

"Ille come when im ready"Sally sighed looking up at the trees.

"Please yourself"

Sally hated her brother so muh, he had not changed he had been so mean and cruel and thought he was the boss now since their mum and dad had passed away, but their older sister Chrissie was more of a person who looked after them, including their other sister Wendy.Sally did beleive in the fairies, at the young age of 11, as she was the youngest as Marco was 19, Chrissie was 22, and Wendy was 13. They did sometimes think that Sally was going mad with all this fairy stuff, but Sally knew that where she was now, in the forest, thatthere was a magical kingdom, and that it belonged to the fairies of the north.

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