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Afterlife

By Sarah L McConaghy All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Romance

introduction

I was sitting in my room when it happened.

I'd been reading, attempting to get my mind off of my most recent fiasco when the wall I was leaning on got unbearably hot. I don’t know how I hadn't noticed the rising heat before, but boy did I notice it now. Not a few moments later, after tentatively deciding to ignore the heat, did I hear the sirens. There was a sound that reminded me of when my family goes on vacation, too, frantic and... excited.

A searing pain suddenly ripped through my leg. I opened my eyes, fire.

That’s all I remember, that was the beginning of the end, my death.


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Wapple02: I fell in love with this story from the first sentence. It was written beautifully, there were some grammatical errors, but besides that it was awesome. I cried every time I read the last chapter. I read the last chapter seven times. I don't want it to be over.

Papito: Interesting premise. Sentences choppy with some not even necessary. An experienced educated editor will help.

Bad: The Setting was applicable to the characters, the readers can relate to the story.The author use the POV which the readers can feel, and the author keeps hook in every chapter and it will make you to rethink about everything.It was a hooking story, since from the beginning to the end, it has many...

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Helloitsemily: I am a girl that gets bored easy so does lots of things at once but this was incredible it made me read all of it and not get bored

Ilanea Zavala: I loved it and well I really hope you continue writing more to the story.

William Elliott Kern: Long story, the plot uncovered midway through the story. From beginning, the story was fast moving. Then dragged on for quite some time. The Author was good in describing her characters, their clothing, etc. but a lot of that disclosure distracted from the story moving fast.Not withstanding, the...

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