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a curse lifted

By Rebecca Edwards All Rights Reserved ©

Mystery / Fantasy

introduction

There was a small town called Ivy Vile. It was very peaceful there; everyone knew everybody. No one was scared to be out at night. But there was one place that everyone steered clear of, especially at night.

A tall dark grave yard stood at the top of a hill. It had ivy growing every where;the walls were ancient, they looked like they were going to fall apart;if they didn't have a wall of twisted veins supporting it. A black iron gate hid what was inside the grave yard from the out side world. No one has been inside there for 50 years after an incident where two young girls died.

The two young girls went in there to gather leaves for their art project and stayed out there too long. The next day their bodies were found outside of the grave yard; both girls had been raped and they had their blood sucked out of their bodies.

The whole town were terrified; nothing like this has ever happened before, women and children were tooscared to leave their homes, men tried to be strong. However they were also scared to the bone. Only four police officers were brave enough to go in there, their bodies found mutilated the next day.

Rumours started to spread around the town saying that the devil lives there and that he kill anyone who ever entered his grave yard. Since then no one has ever even gone up to the old iron gates, Well that is till now...

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