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The new legend

By lunadevil All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Adventure

Chapter 1

The start of a new legend

there once was a island and this place was home to many story's let me tell you about the island that came and changed how everything worked there was 9 land or kingdoms each with a giant wall around it all made out of different thing so was made the 8 kingdoms there is Ice, Iron, Fire, Earth, Air, Light, Dark and death each had a king or queen and their names were knew far and wide as the most powerful people each had done something Egregious that earned them a title in this land their names are "Ice" Luna Wolf "Iron" Devil Sara "Earth" had a leader but no one knows who he/she is or was "Fire" Blazing Kong "Light" Angel Mira "dark" Shadow Marcus "Air" Hawk Ann "Death" Black Grim each has its own people in a way Air has fairy's, Ice has polar bears, Fire has dragons, Iron has iron robots, Dark has bats, Light has Rabbits, Earth has Elks and Death has the Undead Hounds.

The kingdoms were 8 different all with its own weather and all with its own powers but in the middle of the huge island there was a kingdom without a king or a queen because in this kingdom the people and adventurers lived there were people and many adventurers in the other kingdoms to but this is where they started all think of it as a game when you started you are in a nice place and you chose your character and what your race and type you will be then you would say what kingdom you would belong to well the same would happen her new people each week would started her in this kingdom with no memory of how they got there or what they were doing as if they were just made.

Each person would start off with a name and gear like in your games they could see their health bars and health and mana bars of the other around them and over there HP bar they had their name and there was the 8 place for the holograms of the kings and queens well - the earth one and they would get a message just tell them to say read about the kingdoms and there powers and choice what one they want to go with then after that they would get a second message tell them to do a quiz so they can be given a class.

To a person just been made this is all happen very fast so they are help people or should I say help AI's to help the new people to understand what they are doing and everything is ok.

After the new person has claimed down and started to take in their surroundings they would do the quiz and after they were done it would message back with their class name and what it can do and some gear for that class and add in a joke if you were the same class as the king or queen of your land.

Now that we know this land is a bit better let’s get to the main character of this story it's a young girl just been made and her name is Moon she had sliver eyes, long blue hair, very white skin, around 5 foot 4" with Reggie clothes on and had little shoes on she joined the Ice kingdom and got a rare class called multi-classer only a few people in all the lands had it.

It was the only class that's allows the person to be train in any and all weapons but the girl being only around 14 she became scared very easily even know thee AI's were trying their best to get her to claim down she would not stop and began to cry but then she heard a voice not like the computer Ai voice but a person voice a gentle and kind voice but also strong when she looked up and dried her tears she saw a man with Icy blue armour on patting her on the head saying its ok.

Sitting there for about 30 seconds with this man patting her head she shouted at him " am not a dumb dog you know so stop it!" as everyone stop and gasped she can hear people saying stuff like "did you hear what she said" "and to him of all people" she didn't know what she had just done. The man got up and looked down at her "well am sorry little girl but you were crying and I thought it would claim you down" as she stared at him just trying to find out who he was she saw a name and read "L-L-Luna Wolf" she said again to make sure she got it right then ask "am sorry sir but am new here who are you" the man just smiled and pointed at the hologram and there was a plate on the bottom of it she read it out loud "Luna Wolf the most P-P-POWERFUL MAN ON THIS ISLAND...also the Ice King" with her shock face and eyes as wide as a headlight on a bus she turned even whiter than she was and in fear he might be anger she got upset again and began to cry.

Luna stared to pat her on the head again and said "don't worry little girl I know you must feel alone scared but don't worry and not mad if you can’t tell am happy" she turn to look at the man he was right he was just standing there with a big grin on his face like a boy in a candy store she could see he was not mean or scared a bit weird but we all have our down falls then she remember "you're the ice king and am in the ice kingdom so that mean" as she about to get to the end of what she was saying Luna steps in " don't worry about it am just happy someone new joined my kingdom now I am here to give you this" he handed her a bag it had a watch and a few weapons some potions and last of all a guide book tell her what she should do to get stronger and about the kingdom. Moon turn to Luna and ask "is it normal for the king to come down her to see all new people" Luna thinks for a few seconds and says " well it’s not normal but it’s not normal to meet someone of your class ether I never thought I would meet a 2nd and be in my kingdom" Moon standing there not understanding what he meant then she remember she is a super rare class and ask " who is the other one of my class I mean" Luna just points at his plate again and the girl stars to read again.

After reading the plate from top to bottom it told her his class was the same as his and he was the first ever to have that class she look back Luna and only just notice all his weapons he had (a shield, twin swords, a great sword, 2 pistols, a sniper and to daggers on his legs) thinking for a moment she says " if am the same class as you that means I will have carry all that too " a pause for a second and ask " can I change class because I think I will die if I had to carry all that" the King just laughs and says "don't worry you can lift it you're the only class that can so do worry have fun and goodbye" at that moment he just disappear in a flash of light so the girl read the guide and put her gear on she wanted to be a medium armour it has good defence and good movement and put her gear the same way Luna had his set up first the great sword on her back then the sniper on top of it then the shield over lapping both of them but her swords at her sides pistols are her but and daggers on her Thighs.

She had all her gear setup now all she need to do was learn to fight she thought to herself I wonder what I will have to fight I hope it something small and easy to start off with maybe like a beetle or a bird walking down the road towards the newbie area woodlands she looks at her map it says that the woodlands are for people level 1-10 and she thinks I wonder what it means by levels.

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