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The Lost World

By Naita Vidi Lune Kurôkami All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy

Chapter 1

Lying down, the sun blind me as I open my eyes. I sit up smilling at the world I live in.

The vast blue sky stretch on as far as the eyes can see; the meadow where I am is full of mutilcolor flowers that rainbow colored butterfly gather pollen from; In front of me there is a forest in which I can see little shadows sitting on branches and taller one next to the trees. On my left, some distance away, there's a lake where all kind of animals are drinking from; foxs, wolfs, does... And also griffins, chimeras, unicorns...; behind me i can't see the end of the meadow and on my right there's an hill.

I stand up and start  going in the direction of the hill when a butterfly fly on front of me, looking closer I can see it's not a butterfly but a tiny woman with butterfly wings, she as big bronze eyes and ginger hair. She look at me with mischief, fly around me and kiss my nose before going back to her friends.

I walk to the hill again, which irresistibly attract me, I start to walk faster, when walking begin to be running, a mouvement from the forest which I kept getting closer to, attract my attention. I can see what are the shadows from earlier, the taller ones are elfs and the little ones are imps. I smile at them as I pass by, running faster and faster. I run so fast it's like i'm flying, I climb the hill and behind I can see a cliff that lead directly to the ocean. I can't stop myself i keep running and jump in the cleat water.

I look at the sky through the prism of the water before floating to the surface, closing my eyes and letting the waves rock me. Suddenly I hear a high-pitcher sound next to me, as I upright myself I see a dolphin who look expectantly at me; I cling to his dorsal fin as he swim very fast to the coast on the side of the cliff. During our journey some mermaids join us, laughing their's crystalline laugh. When we're near the coast I swim to it, once on the beach I wave goodbye to the dolphin and mermaids, who waves back.

I sit a little bit in the warm sand before going to the forest, walking at the foot of a volcano I see a ball of fire comming out of it. Wait, no it's a phoenix! Amazed, I stop to admire it until it's only a dot on the horizon and start to walk again.

Once at the edge of the forest I look at you.

That where the journey through my world end. The secret of the forest stay secret, but maybe you'll learn them one day, when you're ready! I say smilling mysteriously and with mischief before disappearing in the darkness of the forest.

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