Get Free Copy

100 free copies left

This novel is limited to 100 free copies due to its part in Inkitt’s Novel Contest.

Free copy left
You can read our best books
José J. Amador would love your feedback! Got a few minutes to write a review?
Write a Review

Lost Angel of Par Amor - The Tree of Knowledge

By José J. Amador All Rights Reserved ©

Action / Fantasy

Prelude - And On The Eight Day...

Before there was water under the sky, before there was light separated from darkness, before there was a Heaven and an Earth, and even before there were angels and demons, there was one thing and one thing alone – the Almighty.  He was the is, the was, and the will always be, all of this before there was a way to tell one from another.  For you see, He is time and He is timeless.  So when the moment was right (for only He knew) He created– time – that which He lived within and without, where He lived in the past, the present, and the future, all at once and none at all. 

During this age, which could have been a second or a billion, trillion years, He created His first joy:  Lucifer the Light.  He then created others like Lucifer, who praised and loved the Almighty, who sang and danced and cherished Him.  And for a countless and immeasurable time, all was good.  Or so it seemed.  For the one He created first, the one who brought Him the first joy slowly began to bring Him the first pain.  Not pain in the sense you and I feel, but pain in the form of willfulness, deceit, and worst of all hate.  A pain that spread to others who blindly followed Lucifer the Light as though he were a god. 

Then came the day when His first joy declared himself equal to the Father, as he boldly tried to sit upon the throne of the Almighty.  That was the day of the first, terrible war in Heaven, the day in which black and white were created, good and evil, angels and demons. 

With the aid of His newly named angels, Michael the Archangel, Gabriel the Messenger, and others, the Almighty tossed the Deceiver and his followers out of Heaven.  And with a saddened heart, the Almighty transformed the fallen angels – the newly named demons – by taking away their original beauty and letting their true ugliness show from within. 

As a result of this deception the Almighty with His supreme intelligence then decided upon the Grand Plan.  A plan that needed many wonderful things – so quickly He went to work on what He called the First Day.  Beginning with that day, the Almighty created the water under the sky, the light separated from darkness, and a Heaven and an Earth.  He created varied and beautiful creatures to roam the ground, fly the sky, and swim the waters.  He then created two new joys, Adam and Eve, and gave them dominion over all the beautiful creatures.  And then after the Almighty blessed and warned Adam and Eve, and after He rested, it was on the eight day He decided to reward his cherished angels.  For the Almighty so loved them He created a beautiful home for them as well:  Par Amor.  Situated before Heaven as though it were a holy foyer, Par Amor was the angel’s home to live, play, and work the miracles of the Almighty. 

Meanwhile, Lucifer the Deceiver, the newly named Devil, watched with rage and envy from his new home in Hell. 

“How could He give them that palatial home?  That should’ve been mine!  And He thinks He can replace me with those two pitiful beings?  How dare Him?

After more ranting and cursing, Lucifer finally calmed and reflected.  The Deceiver thought of how he, or rather his demon followers, would destroy Par Amor, burn it and then burn Heaven.  How he would walk into Heaven and finally sit upon the throne of the Almighty, becoming the ruler of the universe.  But before any of this could happen he realized the pitiful creatures were not created without a reason.  There had to be a plan.  A plan he could and would and will derail. 

Transforming into a snake, Lucifer slunk to the Earth to ruin His plan.  It was so simple, he laughed to himself, The Almighty was truly stupid.   

“Yesss, with the knowledge of good and evil, thessse pitiful creaturesss will be easssy to missslead.  I will dessstroy them and I will dessstroy Par Amor.” 

Continue Reading Next Chapter
Further Recommendations

skippybash12: This story has engaging characters that you care about and a plot that is unpredictable and exciting. It is well written with a believable voice. Great weekend escape and if there was a sequel available I would buy it today -

Alex Rushmer: This was not what I expected, but I enjoyed it a lot Malfoy was always one of the characters that I liked a lot, so I like that a lot of this happens between him and Colette. I read the first couple chapters, and I enjoyed your writing style and am excited to see where you take this story. My com...

ga1984: I really enjoyed it! Characters were deep and plot was pretty complex. A bit on the violent side but it doesnt detract from the story. Very dark but situations make sense. Ends kinda abruptly and later chapters will need some editing work. I'm assuming there's more in the works?

Ro-Ange Olson: Loved it and couldn't put it down. I really hope there is a sequel. Well written and the plot really moves forward.

summerstone: Seriously this is one of the best books I've ever read. The plot is intriguing, I love the narrative style. Its very descriptive and unique, with minimal cliches. It makes for a great read and the sequels are amazing. Totally worth reading. ^^ That's me trying to be professional. But in all hones...

John Smith: This is what Sci Fi is all about. Reads like early Heinlein. In the style of Space Cadets. No esoteric problems..but good ol blaster and space action with a host of relatable characters

PurpleInkling: Hippocrite is spelt hypocrite.Also it is an awesome story! A good one after so long. I was hoping someone would write a good fanficiton playing off what Ron said at the station. You are doing a remarkable job. It would have been interesting if Albus had also ended up in Ravenclaw though that mig...

Jean Tryon: As a beta, I found this story outstanding!! Plot, grammar, phraseology, etc Rachel gives us it all. She takes the story into the future from where due South ends. She is an exacting and thoughtful author.

RiverSong: So, at first glance, I thought this was just going to be like any other werewolf book out there that you could find on Wattpad, but I was intrigued enough with the little bloop that I wanted to read more. Following that weird thing that I call curiosity, I found this thing called an obsession. Th...

More Recommendations

FateFellShort: I have read this story and have followed the writers on tumblr from the beginning. Its a wonderful story. Beautifully written with a really nice pace, that makes it enjoyable to read more than once. For me, fairy tail has very good characters but what the writers have done is give them more depth...

Olivia N J Hamel: I want this book. I love it so much. It is so enjoyable to read and to have a copy of this always, I would be very happy, to always be able to come back and look at it again.

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral stories!

FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"

The Cyneweard

Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."

This story wasn't for you ?
Look at our most viral story!

Ro-Ange Olson: "Loved it and couldn't put it down. I really hope there is a sequel. Well written and the plot really moves forward."