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Aldamir the boy elf and his birthday adventure

By jojo All Rights Reserved ©

Humor / Fantasy

Chapter 1

There are Elves in fantastic world,and here is a story that takes place in Tulipa land where many elves live. Elwe an elf and his son Aldamir,a little elf boy live in a octagon cottage with a gothic roof tower. The house is in new Transylvania new greenwood forest. They love to play their musical instruments like most elves’ favorite kinds,as mandolins,bells,chimes,and Xylosil rock keyboards,which sound like synth electric keyboard and also rock guitar music,depending on the xylosil metal thimbles used,and strings. After a meal of berries and nuts and vegetable stew ,they also munched a juicy salad. They began to shed gold and blue glitter flakes dandruff from their hair and skin.”tinweh,tinweh”they said laughing. The dandruff fell on some tea cups and made them float in the air. “This dandruff happens so often after we eat salad,but some elves don’t have this gift.Thankfully,with it we can fly today or we can teleport somewhere”said elweh to his son. So they went to their elf closet and pit on elf shoes an picked out some elf hats to wear. There are several kinds of elf hats,some with balls on the end or faux fur,and elf vests to wear. Their clothes can be quite lovely embroidered and intricately designed,and come in rich velvets too,embellished with sparkles from glued down glitter flakes. “now,let us teleport to our farm field allotment fifty miles away from this forest village.its how we elves do it,because we don’t want to develop any fields in our forest because we must preserve the trees and the shade they provide”said Elweh. “ any wood we need,we just use bubble glass Bubbleopia,and fast growing type tree wood with lots of water in it at first called” Faspringoo”a special tree that gets big within a year”. So they held hands and thought were hard for a minute about the place they were thinking of,and with a sniff, and word”callinta!(flash)”poof! They disappeared in a flash of sparkle light. Reappearing fifty miles away out upon a green field outside the forest,which is usually the amount of miles in one hour an elf with this special power can be limited to go within one hour. An elf cottage with a gatekeeper who watches over the fields separate allotments,each owned by a forest elf villager.Hyarmentor is his name and he said”Mai Auray!(good day)you have tomatoes and cabbage,radishes,celery carrots growing here today”. Thanks Hyarmentor. We have baskets to stock up. Im wearing my tight hosery pants.Let me bend over”. A dwarf named Wimbly was watering fields on a hover barge which sprayed out water from a pipe,and he was smoking another kind of pipe. “This is a great retirement job.Did you know my cousin dwarf has hair with strands of blue.The other had pink hair,shes a female dwarf our dwarven fingers all have zigzags and we got large noses,but worst of all,our women dwarves grow facial hair,except I heard,in Azuria land,the water they drink there,makes them not grow any hair on their face,and the men dwarves look like young lads. “ “you dwarves are short like hobbits,except the zigzags finger prints,big noses,beards,strands of blue hair for some of you,and rarely have you any curly hair especially not on your feet.Most of us elves and some of us hobbits have not on hair on our face,so we don’t have to shave!” replied Aldamir the boy elf. “how is your half elf cousin in New Hobbitonia,in Rainbowia land?”asked Wimbly the dwarf. “Oh my half elf,hobbit cousin,Dillweh?He is doing fine!he loves it there. He is so short like hobbits,but he doesnt mind being part of the Small elves tribe,which is different from our original elven taller clans. But smaller elves have been more prevalent over the past few centuries,unlike in ancient Middle earth,where we were all tall. Im pure blood from that descent.Not a human drop of DNA in me,but we elves have chosen to mate with hobbits rather than humans,because humans are prone to unruly behavior,though if we do marry humans,we seek out a good one,when there rarely is one to be found”said Elweh. Wimbly the dwarf teleported with the two elves by holding their hand,and they reappeared back to the elf cottage. They spent a day in the elf village dancing in circles with some elves,and seeing a few elf craftsmen at work in their huts making lovely arts and crafts. Since there is so much crops Elwe brought back,he bartered a a lot of food and bought a nice geometric quilt and a octagon ornament on a necklace to buy for Wimbly and Aldamir. Back to the cottage they came,and all spent the night after dinner. The next morning,Wimbly finished his snoring through his big dwarf nose,and his stocking night cap looked no different than his day stocking dwarf cap. Well they greeted himn with”Mai Cuivaurey(Good awakening).” Wimbly danced a dwarven pow wow and dribbled some blue juice on his beard.”ah a tastey elven breakfast!Pancakes,nuts,exotic fruits,whipped cream,sugar from the candy cane trees, Ooh yum,ice cream fruit,and candy cookie tree nuts.any bacon?”asked Wimbly. “we have veal,but we haven’t any bacon””why no bacon?You wont get a heartattack,you elevs are immortal” “well,were not quite immortal.I will explain to you soon the reasons”said Elweh. Aldamir was cutting his long hair and it caused him later that day to feel weak because he tried to lift a heavy pole in the yard but he felt too weak.”told you not to cut your hair ,longhair is what helps us elves stay stronger. Also helps with magnifying our vision and our extra points on our ears are for better hearing,especially we can pick up perfect musical harmonies in nature” said Elweh. “ Same for dwarves with not cutting our beards. How do you say”where’s the bathroom”in Elvish?asked Wimbly the dwarf.” Its’Yasse- Ay nen rambi.’ Is how you say it”said Aldamir”at least in our Tulipian elvish Quenya dialect”. “Ta na vanima!(That is pretty!)said Aldamir looking at Wimbly’s heart shapes on his boxer shorts. “Hantalyeh(thankyou).whats those words on that rug say?”asked Wimbly. “It is written”MArmando Mellon’ as in ‘welcome friend’. By the way wimbly, I would”Nye-ay melnyev lembilis ar nen fana,ar pelli,ar tia” said Aldamir. “Huh?”. “aldamir said he wants cake,and milk,cookies and tea”today is his birthday”.” A toast to Aldamir in Elvish, Lyanna Enviyatar! And in my dwarvish, Mazu Ta,za ta!” Wimbly sat down on the llama carpet under the skylight,to write a letter in dwarven runes. Then he sealed it in an envelope,but as he licked,it stuck to his beard.”wheres the nearest mailbox?” he said. “Im the nearest mailbox in this village of the forest,with my unique teleporting power,which not all elves have,so they picked me to deliver mail whenever its needed,im nicknamed the Eldar Tintullinta”said Elweh. Chapter 2, well,after Elweh teleported off about 100 miles to Tulipia’s capitol city,Amberion, for 10 minutes,then he returned home and it was time for Aldamir’s birthday party under an oak tree and terebinth tree.”Most elves have these two special kinds of trees in their gardens remembering the legend of Cuivienen lake,in ancient Middle earth.No one knows if the legends are true as chronicled by a human named Tolkien,but we have other accounts too of our race of Elves having appeared somewhere by a lake long ago. “Orta Ore-ay yesta aure-ay(Heart Lift day)”said elwe to his son who blew seventy candles flames on his big vanilla cake. “But he looks only twelve years old!”said Wimbly.” Well so do many humans in Zarka land,because of the waters there reversed their ages,but we elves simply age much slower. Aldamir’s gifts were new toe curved shoes,(vinya talcollo),undumuina(underwear),nen nissima(cologne),tuptoh(hat). “ah,a hat with its pointed top for relaxation energy!it enhances my aura and chakras as we call it(Calamaicollo Peloncala)!which is like a swirling aura at times”said Aldamir. “I will get you the Elvapresa Elven singing hat for Christmas”said Elweh.”Hantalye! Its shaped kind of like a tall hair pompadour with side burns.That will help me sing better”said Aldamir. “im glad he didn’t ask for a hover sail,or hover mobile.the hover ore is rare around here,but its something my dwarf friends love to search for,as it’s a precious commodity to smith for.the stuff is like no other metal!Its hovers!”said wimbly. I have a piece in my pocket. He dropped it and it is a small ball of metal that hovered over the floor. Elweh’s wife walked over,with her beautiful gothic dress,with lace intricacies.”Vanimaina”welcome home” elweh said. “She loves me to buy her gorgeous elven fashions,many of which have touches of gothic and much lace and velvet”said elweh”it’s a popular elven fashion style,even for men,just as much so aslarger elven villages, the Elves have homes shaped like that cake ,with three round tops”said Elweh. “we even go as far as making some of our homes shaped like big cookies or other desserts,because of our obsession with sweets and sugar!”said aldamir. “we love sugar and lace!Anything that sparkles as well. All is an Elvish art”said Vanamaina. “sweet you are,my good elves! Your men up to age 300 are nicknamed Twinks,by us dwarves and humans. Rightly so,you are sweet as twinkies,and your ladies are named Sugar babes,and Sparklers “said wimbly the dwarf. They all invited fellow elven villagers to the birthday party and even some intelligent bears,who are able to telepathically communicate with elves and they know how to be peaceful with them but still quite hungry,so this party had plenty to eat,but the elves told them to eat slowly and not make such a mess. One bear was eating so fast and got cake frosting all over his face. Wimbly had frosting on his beard. He gave aldamir a gift,it was a white glowing rock.”Its milkzum rock,very rare in these parts,but I have heard there are many mines and mountains of it in Zarka land,and it glows in the dark,making the room light up like glowing white milk”he said. Aldamir thanked him,and then joined in a circle dance with fellow elves,Ornendil and Feantur and Calien and kementari a pretty elven girl. Flowers began to blossom in the garden. The joy stocking caps which many elves wear help their auras feel joy!The elves auras were glowing in swirling colorful lights and even the rocks were dancing somewhat,because they had auras activated too by the elven music. Aldamir sprinkled some gold dust on his piece of vanilla cake and with thought power,it hovered in the air into his mouth. Wimbly the dwarf could see with his thermal detecting vision,a turkey moving through the forest.”these dwarven thermal heat eyes come in handy for us dwarves in the dark caves.but not all of us have this ability. Certainly,which is why many of us prize Geltonium glow jelly and Milkzum glow rock.so aldamir, how old are you?”asked Wimbly.”im seventy but I only look about 12. We elves stay kids for 100 years,and then we stay what you would call in human terms,’teen’ looking for another 200 years.but hobbits,they stay kids for 30 years,and then teen looking for up to age 60.But if you wanna know if were immortal.You know its major depression by choosing to leave this form and life,or a serious wound ,such as in battle,which only ends elves physical life”said aldamir. “But then,grief is not just our grief,which can end an elf’s life,but its if an elf is a bad evil person,such as a bully,would it be a grief to the other elves and to God,and thus that would end his or he r life,if they grieve others and so that though energy keeps only good elves alive. Looking back on the legend of feanor the elf,he was rebellious,but his life was spared for a long time to serve a purpose to about age 200 something. Many elves who do wrongly,are prewarned through elf prophets,and the bad behavior can cause them to get skin rashes and weakness,and even be shrunk smaller than the one foot fairies,to about 5 inches,and sent into exile and slavery. Only good elves mainly exist among our race as it is with the Fantastic world fairies. “ interesting ,How else could you die if not by grief or a big wound”asked Wimbly. “We cant drown in water,unless we chose to by grief,and we cant any other way because our aura has a forcefield,its called the ‘ Calamaicollo Matir’,and it constantly regenerates and most of the time,is a forcefield against most types of steel,and rocks,and allows them to pass through us without harm,but Goblin steel could pass through the forcefields at one time,which is why elves were slain in Middle earth.” “tell me about the tall pointy hats”said Wimbly. “The legendary Gandalf and many wizards taught us that their pointy hats act as a pyramid to enhance and draw aura energies from good energy in the environment. Theres also elvish hats for meditation energy,and relaxation energy,or energy itself “said elweh. “I have to wear my pointy hat a lot or else I get depressed or an itchy rash”said Ornendil,an elf. A human friend of Aldamir’s came and handed aldamir a birthday gift,it was some human styled shirt and pants from Amberion city. Aldamir wore it and then suddenly,all his clothes disappeared off him except his tightey whities. His star shaped nippled shined in the light. “happens every time! Whenever I put on human styled fashions,they disappear! Happens with all elves,an enchantment to keep elves from looking dressed as humans. Aldamir painted a glitter star on the left cheekbones of the party guests. “A star on the chee k is an elf custom of honor and friendship”said Aldamir, "Whenever a human has a small sun spot on their cheek bone,it was a sign to elves of goodness. Such was Duchess Jo bear,she has a sun spot on her cheek and elves love her very much. Her beautiful forest,the Fernberry duchy is an area of Quendemar land." The Elves at the party with elwe and aldamir started to jump in a ballet dance high and slow motion over the tree tops and then slowly back down upon the grass. "wow,you elves have mastered slow motion jumping power"said wimbly the dwarf. They held his hand and practiced and laughed with joy from tree top to tree top! Then finally resting under some rock cliffs on a hill. Suddenly a rock came rolling down coming right towards them! But it bounced away because of a forcefield around the elves'auras. Another rock came down and turned to dust powder. Elwe focused his elf magnification eyesight over the forest . This ability is an elf power that sees far range objects very close,just as Legolas the elf prince has too. Aldamir and Wimbly and elweh and the other elf friends ballet slow motion leaped over to where they had beheld smoke in the distance. There they found the happy elf bakery shape like a big round cake,with three layers atop,and it was seemingly having a lot of smoke arising out of its chimneys. "Oh its the happy elf bakery called Tintillese-ay.looks like they overcooked some thing!" The small cooking fire was put out by a group of elves within who have the magic elf ability,which some elves have, to extinguish fires,through special smoke emiting out of their palms. This makes many elves throughout Fantastic world ,valued as fire fighters,besides postal deliverers for teleportation powers. To be continued.... 2. 2 At the big bakery of the smaller half hobbit,half Tolkien tall Elves,they were using their super speedy fingers to bake some sweets and and sell them for free since the production was fast labor and efficient. Elves can also spin weave and spin yarn superfast! this fast labor makes things affordable,even free a lot of the times. So much elf sugar cotton candy trees grew on the plantations and it is plentiful,so that even the elves in the north pole of Fantastic world,in Snowlandia,also grow pink cotton candy trees near the great Pink desert,close to Snowlandia. They then teleport to the pink tree plantations to retrieve the pink and baby blue sugar and then return to their towns. Here,it is similar,and the large ,but peaceful spiders nibbled on the pink cottoncandy trees and licked the sugar the striped sugar cane stems and the top of these short trees have a bushy cotton candy fluffiness. The spiders became sugar addicts! Most of the large spiders rolled over and passed out from too much sugar. Wimbly the dwarf was eating some of the cotton candy of the tree inside the bakery gardens in an inner courtyard ,while some Elves cracked open the striped candy cane part,and the sugar poured. Rooms in the bakery factory had cinnamon rolls,jellly donuts,and many different candy rooms. Wimbly,as some dwarves, have magnetic hands,and he climbed up the walls while elves were baking their donuts and filling jelly and cream in them. Wimbly was so excited and he leaped from the wall into a room full of jelly beans! he swam in them and had so much fun.Then they headed to the chocolate coolant room,and whip cream room,where it is stirred in a big pot. A special blue coolant jelly in glass boxes kept the whip cream and milk cool within the top half of the boxes of glass. this blue jell is what comes from underground in subter annea rivers of gorgeous colorful jelly rivers and the blue is used for coolant of foods and drinks. it even freezes if a lot is brought together. This jelly called Geltonium has been a favorite of dwarves,used to light up their underground caves. Its simply put in glass bulbs to light up the rooms! Orange geltonium will heat up if stirred in a pot with some types of sparkle crystals within the jelly. The Dwarves discover a lot of Geltonium(second best thing to Dwarven Mithril silver) and they barter Geltonium with humans and elves in return for food,since not much grows under the land,except Zazpav fungi,which is a good dwarf granola bar. Wimbly held to Aldamir,"you feel so warm in this cold blue geltonium room"he said. "Thats how elves stay warm in Snowlandia.We have a natural body heat that adjusts to cold temperatures,Good body heat,same for some hobbits,explains those rosy cheeks"said Aldamir. 3 Wimbly and the elves from the birthday party finally left the bakery factory and walked through a small elf village nearby. It has gothic victorian houses with scale shingles,and so much ornamentation. There were also some cake shaped houses and cookie shaped with glitter sparkles painted all about them. The paint seemed to glow and be glossy wood. "Alot of the homes are painted with geltonium mixture paint,and the walls are not all wood,but have brownish red paint from brown paint on glass bubbleopian flexiglass walls"said Elweh. "we elves love gothic fashions,sometimes we do wear pretty make up with stars on us,but because we already are so pretty,the make up is only for special days."said aldamir. The elves have admired what we call second empire victorian house architecture,but the wealthier elves have intermixed it with italianate sometimes,and gothic. "We love these cupolas and pinnacle egg shaped towers,ever since the days of our ancestor Elves days in Middle earth"said Elweh,"the towers such as in our stories chronicled by the human jrr tolkien,and our own bards,told of the lovely towers in middle earth and Tol Eressea island. We believe the towers are lovely because we can see stars,and the landscape of the many trees below,or the sea,or anything in nature.They also work to draw in good land and sky auric energies to enliven our dwellings."said Elweh. "That explains why many of us Elves live in tree houses,we love heights,amid the tree tops,as if we are birds"said Aldamir. "very few tree houses can compare to ones in Mallorn trees!they last over a thousand years and they do exist in Fantastic world too.They are huge and hold so many tree houses,we call flets. Mallorns exist in New Lorien in Valinor where Galadriel the elven queen of legend lives when she came from Middle earth long ago!". "I have heard there is also a rare area of Mallorns in Galadriel's colony land of Virglorien"said Wimbly the dwarf. Aldamir's painted star on his cheek began to sparkle."My tinwe-ay tita is begiining to glow!My Peloncala(Aura) is becoming visible. it is a sign,a great friend is approaching nigh unto us soon"said he. Aldamir was wearing a round medallion tree shape on his necklace. Many Elves wear special medallions shaped like trees or elf family coat of arms designs.You would be surprised many resemble a cross with arms spread outwards. "Inya mai eldar(my good elves),Nye-ay colvista orta ore-ay(i feel heart raised)"said Aldamir. "its so nice you feel happy"said wimbly."Lye-ay nar marmando(you are welcome)"replied Aldamir. Out to the moors on a foggy expanse with prairie grasses,they came and Aldamir sprinkled a few huge rocks with gold glitter. The rocks floated in the air,directed by thought power! and a stonehenge like circle of rocks was formed! "Gold dust ,called Laurie-ay kementinwe-ay or Calinta kemen Tintilvi( flashy sparkle fly) is like how a bee reforms pollen in its stomach to make honey ,but some elves like me form it from dandruff or skin glitter flakes, several days after eating lettuce"said he. Aldamir mixed some gold dust in the soil mixed with wimbly's mithril coins.They multiplied a hundred more!" i had to pray to our God for any increase,and if things multiply,its really from him.this kind of miracle happens sometimes!" Wimbly was excited,"If only we could multiply mithril and jewels all the time,we wouldnt have to work.but this has happened once or occasionally i heard in Azuria land by Aule-ay the guardian Valar spirit. Legends written by Tolkien,many which are overly elaborated myths in the very first tales of how Valar formed natural things, say Aule-ay was given privilege to form all dwarves originally in Middle earth,and now,he has given us new homes in Fantastic world,as the other Valar spirit guardians helped guide elves to Valinor and here in new Archenland Tulipia"said Wimbly. "I would love to revisit Valinor again,tell me more about it my elven father"said Aldamir. "Valinor to the northeast of Fantastic world,has ornamental rocks like you find on a holiday christmas tree.They glitter in different glitter colors,but its a different non hoverable glitter. Some berries grow with a light in the night like a christmas tree.The flowers as the velvety petunias are huge there! you feel as if youve shrunk as the smallest elves,the fairies there and as if youre in one of their beautiful realms. The many huge Broccoli looking trees are there and cauliflower white trees,and Bokchoy looking trees,those forests are so bright and the tree trunks are so thick and smooth. There are the all year long pink and purple and yellow fluffy leafed trees,but indeed there are some of these pink ,purple,yellow trees in other places of Fantastic world. Suddenly,Legolas the legendary elf prince walked up to them in his green cape hoodie.with him was his son Landolas,who also has long blond platinum hair. "I have been wandering about New Greenwood forest on my journey down from Valinor.I come here to reminesce. For indeed this place truly is a copy in the image of my beloved homeland Greenwood the great of Ancient Middle earth.Here we are in an area of what would be the northeastern edge of the forest." They bowed to him and his son."your son is Wood king Landolas of the forest!We pledge our allegiance to you your Elf majesty"said aldamir."Elweh,look into my eyes and see what you see telepathically"said Legolas. to be continued.... 3. "Ah legolas,i see in your eyes the blue sea with seagulls flying in each round white bubble cell that glows with the silver moon tree and golden tree of day,upon a green hill floating over the sea .But then,a Tree of life even much larger,more than any other tree that exists, with the shape of a cross,its main arms stretched out,immortal above those two trees. this same image alike in each cell!"said elweh. This that you see,is deep in every elf's inner soul and cells.Its the longevity power given as a privilege to us elves.because some of the immortal power of the Tree of life ,the tree of God was brought into its seeds,which the golden tree of valinor and moon trees Laurelin and Telperion were of such descent.That is why we are not fully immortal because we had not then eaten of the tree of life, which would have made us and you fully immortal,but instead we ate of the two children's fruit, who were called laurelin and telperion. So at Valinor,many of us elves ate of the fruit of these two Valinor trees,but also,many of the fruits of these two Valinor trees were also reproducing seedlings and these were planted in Cuivienen where elves first appeared. These became transformed into some of the terebinths and oak trees. each new generation of later trees became not as powerful as the first generation,but still limited immortal power was there. But even that first second generation being the Valinor tree Laurelin and telperion were children of the Tree of life, so also their brother tree existed from long before it appeared in Narnia world. This was known as the Tree of Protection,which a boy on a unicorn named Digory had discovered. Its fruit made one immortal pretty much. Yet the greatest tree where they all descended,where it all began was this Great Tree of life,which we elves all hope to see someday.It is prophecied humans too will find the tree of life and then both men and elves and dwarves will come together and and receive fullness of true complete immortality,true eternal life.There will be no death at all",said legolas. "we seek the Lord of the Tree of Life,and as we had called him Eru.so also his name to us elves is 'El ElyonEruYah' and to pray and worship him everyday is the most truest thing we should feel and act upon" said Aldamir. Legolas and his sonn Landolas,with Elwe and all the other elves withh Wimbly held hands and suddenly star lights and swirls of red,white and blue streams of colors swirled around them with stars in them. They danced joyfully in a circle. "elves love to dance in circles,as it creates great fun energy"said Landolas,the little boy elf,son of legolas. Night time had already come and the stars above were so pretty above the fields. "This auric energy is the Elve'ah cala pel melda love light",said Aldamir. They looked and there in the sky was a small star of crystal and light. It was so pretty with many rainbow colors streaming along its sides. It landed upon the fields next to them,and there appeared as if by magic from within the star, four lovely Tall elves in robes and their hair was pretty and long and platinum. "ah its our cousins from Valinor,the elves sent from Varda the Valar queen,in Valmar city of Valinor. She has come to bring me back to my home in Alqualonde in Eldamar"said Legolas. "the valar have provided some of the eldest eldar with this rare and wonderful sky star crystals,the traveling Star lights of wonder"said Legolas. The star also had the Vala named Vanna there with the four lovely tall dignified and loving elves. They beamed forth a beam from the star crystal and it made a lovely gemoetric design on the fields. It had star shapes and it was so intricate,a real work of art! two of the elves on the ship were smaller half hobbit elves with them and they were pouring some egg nog in glasses.It was good to drink! And there came forth suddenly appearing from what apeared to be another star,beginning to appear above that star and it poofed into many white ball lights and glittery stardust. Out of the beauty of this yet new star appeared the legendary hobbit,Frodo baggins! He was wearing white mithril one piece suit and a green sparkley cape. He was a 12 year old looking hobbit boy again! he walked down the ramp from the ship and his body was glowing all light blue,and he seemed ethereal,and translucent to an extent. "You look so younger than i thought you would be.It is you the great Frodo! "said Aldamir. "Greetings! i come from a place beyond Valinor. I have lived in Valinor for many years since i left Middle earth and escaped the heaviness on my heart in those days. I was regenerated into becoming a small child where i forgot much of my past for many years. My life was extended,for i was given an elvish fruit from a seedling long preserved in Valinor,descended from the tree Telperion. I am now recently become ethereal and moved onto a higher more glorious realm so wonderful,but i come to give you little king landolas of the new Greenwood forest,the last seed of laurelin." said frodo. "why must i use it?","to save the elves in your forest from the energy of longevity that is beginning to extinguish from elven cells.If you take not this seed and grow a small sapling,then in five years,the elves all over will become mortal,but also ailing before that time. Most of all,the new tree you plant will save the forest elves from depression,and bring joy to the forest. "said frodo. " Frodo,you have come from the Land of the Lord of the tree of Life?"asked Legolas. "yes! And you all may wonder how the Elves discovered the about the Lord of the tree of Life? As such,you know elves as Galadriel have been gifted for many years with prophecy,and telepathy."said frodo. legolas began to tell them some history."In the second age,a time traveler human from a kingdom of the saxons of some land called England on Planet earth,traveled back to the past through time and to ancient earth,where he arrived on his teim etraveling ship to Numernor island Tol Eressea island of the elves. He was eriol Aelfwine,and with him he brought his holy book and what he knew of the Lord of the tree of life,a man who is Eru the name elves call God in human form and who died on a tree. This sacrifice is what gives the eternal full immortality and joy which we elves seek. The righteous of humans seek Him too. For though elves sometimes seek to escape the depression and heaviness of heart and boredom from living centuries that we feel alot,except in Valinor it is unfelt. We always have known,since Eriol told us,the lord of the tree of life heals our weariness,just by thinking of him,and He is now the light of Valinor. For in Valmar and atop Taniquetil,the glorious light shines when the great clouds come over them each day. There is more than sun there,it is a glorious whiteness to the sky,and makes all green grass grow,even amidst the fog and clouds. We feel such wonderful love in the air when he comes once a week. This same fog came when Eriol came and first told us of Him,for he was wearing a tree shaped cross necklace. Our elf prophecies even Middle earth's second age told of Eriol come forth.The elves knew what had happened for the love and joy had arrived. We were given christianity in a form where a cross is seen more as a tree,and scripture was imprinted in our heart,rather than at first receiving the exact words of Eriol's holy book,for he had not brought it with him on his time travel journey,but told us of what he memorized in it. We were told and had foreseen the lord of tree of life,a man who is Eru God in human form. The Gondorians later had copies of the words of Eriol Aelfwine the mariner time traveler,when the men who were the righteous had escaped Numernor on the 9 ships to Middle earth. Elrond also had a copy of the words in his book at his house. Numenor had become full of apostasy,for many men had chose to neglect the holy words of Eriol and not seek Eru. Gondor land treasured the words from Eriol in their writings,memorializing the words and prophecies along with their tombs and monuments."said Legolas. "This explains the sacredness of the Tree symbol to the ancient Gondorians too ,as it was to the Elves."said Frodo. "yes, because as Tol erressea island still stands,but Numenor island fell through apostasy,well both the Gondorians and even now,with the Elves, we have a tree shaped emblem like a cross with arms stretched out.This symbolizess the Lord of the Highest tree. King elendil of the second age,said that Elrond and Galadriel had a prophecy of the great tree with a man on it,and blood red sap came forth from both of them,and the sap was sweet as honey and brought forth purity to everyone who loved and believed in its power. The Elon has been another word for Oak' tree,and terebinth. This is how the words for the high tree of an oak has been deried from our word for God,El Elyon eru yah'the highest Lord God highest man of the highest tree. We have known who He was for centuries,even if Tolkien ,our human chronicler visionary may not have forth right spoken of or realized it because we do not have churches but we do have outdoor prayers and dances to praise El Elyon Eru Yah. Our Elf christianity has been somewhat unrealized by men,yet our belief is there! i have always been a believer"said Legolas. "I do know Christmas has always been elves' favorite holiday and now we should realize why it tis truly so"said frodo as he smiled at them all. Legolas bid his son little king landolas farewell for now,as Legolas was to return to Alqualonde city in Valinor. Suddenly,the four elves from valinor .their star crystal that they had appeared from when they landed from the sky. began to speak with a voice,and it said"Are you about ready to return dear Legolas?" Then it transformed into Gandalf! He was the star! which he had been able to metamorph into as a form. Maia spirits can do this! Frodo said Happy birthday to Aldamir,"soon,you and all the righteous men and elves will be brought up in this rapturous beam,and the longing and yearning of elves' and men who seek the pure joy and love from Him and the fruit of the tree of Life will be given!For truly,Elves have so longed for eating of the tree of life,and they know of its pure joy and love and ecstasy,from samples of the cloud joy that comes from El Elyon Eru Yah upon Valinor once a week.finally,both paradises will be linked and elves and men to be fully eternal and perfect in love and joy"said frodo. and then he gave them the two finger peace sign and a blue beam of tunnel light from heaven opened up and he was pulled up into the glorious bright beam! he beamed up and into the stars. What a dramatic majestic exit that frodo made! Gandalf looked up and put a cross necklace on Aldamir."happy birthday from your story book hero the wizard Gandalf,whom you have long read about and always wanted to meet in person"he said. aldamir was so thrilled that all this happened tonight."I got to meet YOU and FRODO AND LEGOLAS!WHAT A BIRTHDAY!" Then gandalf smiled and he with legolas and the four elves with Vanna the vala lady,disappeared in a flash of light ,"Callinta!(Flash)"they all said,and it then reappeared as a comet overhead going northeastwards into the land of Valinor. Frodo had gon estraight upwards in a farther direction,to a greater Heaven. Valinor is closer in Fantastic world,geographically,it is just north east of Tulipia land,but few humans can enter it now days until a special time in the future,yet elves may eneter it anytime,if they are good pure of heart.The Land there knows who is good. 4
The next week later, Elweh and Aldamir went on a day's trip to visit Southwest Valinor's Fana melda Yavannah castle,where inside looks like a mall of white marble and skylights. It was a day to go and have fun there with the many elves and enjoy all the dances and the music there and the christmas parade in the mall castle. beautiful star shapes painted on the floor and marble shining all about with red and white tapestries all about. "Christmas is truly special to us all,and we know why.It is what has made us elves known for our joyousness,because christmas is about the heart of it all,and its reason that makes us truly good and loving elves and humans".

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