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The Amazing Powerful Beagle

By Butterfly_Magic All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Fantasy

Chapter 1

The Amazing Powerful Beagle is a dog that is super powerful, and can do anything that you need her to do but only for a dog treat that she likes, and the kind that she likes is the bacon dog treat. The Amazing Powerful Beagle name is Aurora. Aurora is the nicest dog to citizens that are not the bad people but she is not so nice to the bad people that do wrong. One day there was an older lady walking down the street when a guy came up behind her and took her purse and Aurora went after the guy and she got the purse back and dragged the guy back to the lady and gave her back her purse and then she dragged the guy down to the police station. Then when Aurora was walking down the street the lady that she got the purse for gave her the treat. Aurora went on her walk when this guy came up to her and grabbed her by the collar and dragged her to the van that he was driving and put her in the back of it and got in the van and drove off. The guy took her to a warehouse where they drugged dogs that have super powers and saves the world.

Later on that day, Aurora woken up to dogs barking so she tried to stand up and she couldn’t because of the drugs that the guy had given her. So she barked back to the other dogs. Aurora wasn’t scared of the guy she wanted to save the dogs so that he couldn’t drug them or drug them more than he already has. Five minutes later, the guy came into the room with a needle of drugs that he was going to give one of the dogs, the next thing you know Aurora was out of the pen that she was in and was biting the guy with the drugs. The guy turned around and gave the drugs to her instead of the other dog that he was going to give to. The guy took Aurora to another room so that she couldn’t try to stop him from giving the drugs to the other dogs with super powers.

The next day the owners of Aurora was out looking for her and they couldn’t find her but they did run into the lady that Aurora got the purse back for and they asked her if she saw Aurora and she said that she did and she also said that she got my purse back and dragged the burglar to the police station and I gave her a treat as a thank you for getting my purse back for me. She also said that she saw that she was taken and put in a van and that she tried to stop him but didn’t get there in time before he took off. The owners told her thank you and went to the police station to get help to look for Aurora. Later that day, the guy let Aurora out on the corner and she was walking down the street and she took some little kids bike and started riding it like a person does. The little kid was looking at Aurora like she was something else. Aurora then started stealing things that didn’t belong to her and beating up people that said something to her. Aurora went home and the owners didn’t know what to say about her coming home and doing what she did. Aurora decided not to stay at the house she lived at anymore because she didn’t want them to be mad at her for stealing all this stuff and beating people up that says anything to her.

Aurora’s owners tried to stop her from beating up people but they couldn’t end her from doing what she is doing. Aurora decided that she wanted to turn villain than being the superhero that she was before she was captured. The owners of Aurora decided that the best way to end her villain ways was to put her down to sleep so they finally got her when she wasn’t paying attention to them or anything else they put her in a travel cage for animals. When they got to the vet hospital Aurora was going crazy like she wanted out of her cage so that she could attack someone but not just anyone she wanted to attack her owners because they were the ones who put her in the cage and took her to the vet so she wanted to attack them for doing that. Once she got out of the cage she tried to attack them but before she got to them the vet doctor got Aurora before she got them. A minute later, Aurora was put to sleep. The owners of Aurora buried her in the dog and cat cemetery two days later. Aurora’s owners decided that they are not getting any more pets for a long time.

The owners kept their word and didn’t get any more pets but one day out of the blue they got a knock on their front door when they opened the door there was a puppy. So they took her in and kept her for a long time.


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