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Phoenix

By Clairisa23 All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Romance

Chapter 1

Introduction

I always get these ideas in my head creating things in my mind when I'm alone or thinking about stuff or life in general. Sometimes my imagination goes crazy, people look at me and may think this girl is weird or why is she smiling? They always ask me what I'm smiling about, and my reply would always be "it takes to much energy to brood and be mad or angry all the time''

You probably think I'm always a "happy go lucky person" but I'm not. I'm just like everyone else. A normal human being or what your definition of normal is. Let me tell more about myself. I'm a 23 year old with no job (urgh), I quit my previous job but that's a story for another time too complicated to explain. I love to read, write and being creative; I remember when I was little that I cried and begged my mom to get me a library card (how geeky is that!).But I love to read, it just takes you a few minutes to go to another place and time and explore other places or people just to forget about your daily life and it's problems.

But enough of that. What else can I tell you? Oh Yeah! I have no love life, let me rephrase that! I have never had a Boyfriend. How pathetic is that! 23 years old and I never had a guy to call my own.

And that's why I'm writing my story because of my lack of love life. And how I accidentally created one for me. it's not like a Frankenstein's monster or whatever. Not out of peoples body parts (ewww) that's just crazy and messy. Don't get me wrong I'm not a crazy person! It happened by accident really it did! And it spinned my life out of control, you know like a tornado does where it destroys everything in it's path, but not in a bad way just in a crazy way if that makes sense. Oh! I forgot to tell you guys my name, it's Lilliana Rose Lucan. I have dark brown hair and brown eyes, I'm short or petite but look very young for my age. And the day all the mess began is ironically on the day that I went for a job interview. But...well actually the first day, but it's got alot to do with where I work. Well...you will see as my story goes on.

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