Chapter 1
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After two years committed to a psychiatric hospital, Charlie Kane is turning eighteen. He decides to abandon the pharmaceutical cocktails and emotional group therapy, and signs himself out. Instead of returning home to a cold and distant mother, Charlie travels to the mountains of West Virginia in search of answers about his past. When the spirit of Charlie's deceased grandfather appears, the truth about Charlie's past is finally revealed. Charlie is a necromancer, a supernatural being who can manipulate the spirit world and reanimate the dead. With the help of his sister, Charlie gains friends still reeling from the disappearance of one of their own. As Charlie learns to use his powers he discovers the soul of the missing girl and vows to set her free. After discovering another soul being tortured on an abandoned farm, Charlie comes face to face with a dark necromancer and his army of nefari, the mindless reanimated dead. When Charlie finds out the other necromancer is his half brother, Charlie is forced to fight back or risk loosing everything he holds dear.
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Maureen: Great story. A little rushed. I did enjoy how Ryker dropped the mate bomb.Your off to a great start the story is a little rushed and could have more to it but it is nice as a novella.An editor will catch what few mistakes you made, don't sweat it. I'm a writer also and I miss stuff too sometime...
Ashley Brown: It got a little hard to read due to spelling and grammar, but I know editing will come. Overall the story is amazing!!! Well done!!!When you do the italics it makes it harder to know for example is it Dom talking or is it Shade, same with all of them. Maybe if you do a tweak where the wolf for e...