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Right, so basically it’s about this war for a legendary crystal heart that’s pretty snazzy and if you get the heart then you get a throne called The Colossal thrown(I think that’s how you spell it). And the thrown is even more snazzy and I guys you become like the ruler of the world I think and it’s OG. And there is this child that wants to stop the war so that everyone could live in peace. First he gotta get the heart before anyone else and distort it which will distort the thrown and yes. For me the villains are pretty basic but I think they are a little snazzy.

Fantasy / Adventure
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Prologue(how the war started)

A long time ago there we four territories that lived in peace allied with each other. There were no problems that ever existed. The first territory was named [name] and they lived in the desert, yes extremely hot but they knew how to survive. The second one was [name] and they lived in the dry grasslands. The third one was [name] and they lived near the waterfalls. And then two years later there was another one named [name] and they lived near the silver hills. Each one had one leader except for [name], they had two. Like I said they lived in peace until the [names] leader heard of a legend about the crystal heart that existed for years and years.

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Feride: Die Geschichte ist sehr interassant und auch schön geschrieben.

keachsrch: Wonderful story. Will look forward to more of your stories. Especially the one about Willow

Sass: The only review I have again is that I just did a review a minute ago in the previous chapter and I don’t understand why it’s necessary to do it again

patricia: Il est 22h et je ne pourrai me coucher qu'après avoir lu le dernier chapitre, on ne peut commencer l'histoire sans aller jusqu'au bout. Donnez nous d'autres merveilles commecelle ci.merci beaucoup

nzamanokuzola840: I loved every moment of it plz continue to be the great writer you. Thank you so much for taking us on this magical journey.

Hana: Not good not boring either.

Estefanía: Me pareció un poco dramática la reacción de ella. Pero en general me ha gustado

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marilyn: Wow....I can't believe everything that has happened so far. It's so interesting and intriguing

Holly: Can definitely see where the author is going with this. Struggling with some of the grammatical errors but perfectly capable of continuing with the sentence.

paulinemfula22: Interesting

higill: I like your reading your work and i love your writing so please keep it up. I can't wait to read your other works. I will tell my friends about this book.

Mharms: I like the storyline following in the numbered books. This makes an interesting narrative. All adults would enjoy reading.

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