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What the Eyes Can't See

By distraughthallelujah All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy / Poetry

Prologue

It began in the dark.

Many things do. Things that began had an affinity with the dark. The dark nurtured such things much like a parent, guiding them into being and watching them grow. This was as those, beginning quietly, even gently in some strange way.

It was a monster.

Few things deserved such harsh criticism. Surely there was a redeemable quality about it, something that could act as a saving grace from such harsh words? But no… it was alone. Shunned. Hated.

As such, she came into being.

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Rachel Wollaston: This story definitely deserves all its positive reviews--I devoured the whole thing in one sitting! I especially love the character interactions and the raw emotion, and often humour, that they invoke. One thing I will say is that this is a story which may benefit from being in a longer format. T...

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Kezia Goodman: Great premise so far, but the grammatical errors, punctuation and sentence structure makes it difficult to get into the story, I cringe when I read the first page. Requires major editing

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