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Senel: The New World

By LastAutumn All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Fantasy

Foreword


Welcome to Senel: The New World! This is a completely first try for me to create a story so please do understand that this is my first time creating these type of stories.

Dedicated to: My Mother and Father for inspiring me with stories of when I was a child. Especially to my grandmother who will always have a place in my heart and memories.

This story is completely original and fiction. This was all created after long nights of imagination and thinking about this. Majority of this story will be off a person thinking and actions.

Example: Maria thought to herself, “This boy seems to be a natural at swimming”.

The story is based in a world called Senel. This world has beasts from fiction stories and many of which are based off Chinese fictional beasts. An example would be a flood dragon which will appear here and there within the story.

The story has many levels of “Energy/Qi” one can get throughout the world.

Yes, Qi is from Chinese etc., and many of this is probably wrong, but please do understand I thought of it as this.


Mal Qi: Level 1 - 9 (This stage allows the cultivator to finally create a circle within their Dantian. Mainly a misty featured Qi will be produced when one starts Cultivating. Also while this Qi is being created the attribute of the cultivator will appear.)

Dou Qi: 1st Star - 7th Star (Allows the mist Qi in the dantian to thicken and start the process of strengthening the attribute)

Zhou Qi: Full Circle of Qi Cultivation(This has 3 stages Compression stage,Severing stage,Duel stage)(This is end of Mal Qi to Dou Qi Cultivation think of it as a first level in this world.)

Compression Stage: Compressing the Qi within your body to a small pearl like feature. This stage initially condenses the Qi from the mist like geatures into a solid pearl. Doing this allows the foundation of Yin and Yang to fully stabalize.

Severing Stage: The pearl then splits into 2 pearls allowing the Yin and Yang symbol to fully appear doing this allows one attributes to appear and be actually usable for the cultivator. The attribute in the splitting of pearls will allow the cultivator to get two attributes instead of one main attribute.

Duel stage: Fully creating the Yin and Yang it will be able to help Cultivators reach the gates of Dao allowing them to be things such as Sword Immortals, Fire Immortals, War Gods and such.


That will be all for now most will be “Hidden” until the story progresses!

Thank you for reading!

WELCOME TO THE WORLD OF SENEL

Good Luck~

LastAutumn~

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