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“Ever Imagined change? If your life was normal but something big came your way, Could you hack it a feeling you once knew torn and frayed to something that means the new you? Well could you imagine the impossible?”
Molly such a dark girl she was, and in all said and done she was unknown to the world a hidden terror that Molly had been the secret necessity picked to change a life where she came from was a place of light a peaceful paradise taken to experience what life on earth is like. Some say she was an angel but let her mind go insane to the point voices filled her innocent mind with dark thoughts that is when dear Molly fell from grace the thoughts discouraged her from her beautiful heart her angelic self soon became something otherworldly something she let unleash upon the damned world but was yet to awaken. Molly had fell from grace because she let those Devils get into her innocent mind and turn it to fire a reckless kind, but it was more because she needed experience so that darkness does not capture her dear sweet mind and keep her heart captive so all evil can be unleashed.
We first start from the beginning Molly was brought to the earth centuries ago, she was the youngest of the angelic kind, So gentle, Innocent & youthful she was easily lead astray,Molly was at times gullible and so very beautiful, Such a kind hearted child. One night this sweet child was awoken by a strange noise she was later grabbed and chosen to fall to earth to make a change, but she could not help how her small self felt every part of her felt abandoned, but Molly was thrown to the earth to learn a lesson then she would be allowed back into the gates of her dear home.
As soon as Molly fell she did not know where to start, her Radiant blue eyes to rock the very soul of a careless human who came into her young life this becoming the professor. He met her while out on a walk commemorating the time spent with his deceased wife, but on the way he bumped into a small child who had seemingly rose from underground. She had been sitting on the edge of a giant hole full of dirt and was so very young. His eyebrows creased as he wondered were the little child came from.
The Professor did not question it so moves forward directing himself towards Molly taking her hand reassuring her young mind, thinking she was just a lost child “where is your mother?” he asked with a raised brow while his body began flowing with such curiosity with Concern written all over his features. That is when young Molly pointed to the sky, Taking a deep gasp he then responded “In Heaven young child?” Molly nodded gently as the man took hold of the little girls hand leading her towards his home “Here come with me child I shall take you in, have you not a father or even a family that I could contact?” Molly shook her head lethargically having been feeble then the professor took her in.
Every night the professor would hear her pray he would investigate, Molly would ask for forgiveness asking to be accepted back into the kingdom of her home while doing this she would also cry. The Professor epitomized in his diary “those tears sparkled as if they originate with pure drops like rain filled with peace and tranquillity running through her heart.” The professor would also characterize her in his diary writing “How angelic the child was, Such long ginger hair, with beautiful crystal blue eyes, how emaciated, angular and bony her small frame was, along with light-coloured skin, this young Molly was simply extraordinary." he then went on to proclaim “She was just an old soul and knew all that there was to this earth, every story, every legend such a creative mind Molly had.” in all the days he lived with the young girl Molly had been the sweetest almost as if she was made with the essence of an angel’s soul.
Now the professor did not know of Molly being an angel he just considered her as an angelic human being because the professor felt sorry for Molly as she had no one, she was just left upon this earth and had nobody her little soul could rely on, she was not even claimed by anyone just like an Orphan. He became her father and adopted her into his family, he had a mere thought of it as, “two people alone in this world find a family out of themselves” he felt special doing a great great thing for company. But every night he would hear Molly cry and this was none stop until one night he peered in through among the bedroom to check on Molly, she had been asleep while doing this he heard the child crying out in her helpless dreams “Father, Father please bring me back, don’t abandon me I cry out for forgiveness, I am alone and so scared, please father don’t leave me here” Those calls would go unanswered and young Molly was stuck upon this earth with no one she knew of, just the professor who kept her comfort and would sing her back to sleep every night an old lullaby what his deceased mother would sing to him when he was just a little boy.
Of course he did not want to question about her dreams or nightmares but wondered about the words she said and why she would repeat those same painful outbursts each night, yes it did bring a tear to the Professor’s eyes who then vowed to look after this child. Maybe Molly was sent here to create an impact on this lonely man’s life or maybe this was one of her lessons to learn. Molly grew close to him each day, the Professor watched as Molly grew so close just like a father with his child, a great bond they had so inseparable. He taught her all there was to know about earth, showed her the stars above and the moon at night, but also space with the telescope and in the daytime the sky, the sun, the grassy lands, the green trees with forests full of nature, the human’s as they watched vigilant, those families in the park how joyful they were, how nice it was to be human a lovely place.
Molly knew she was safe with the professor, a father and daughter in each other’s eyes, The professor depicted in his diary with such detail “How much her laugh was contagious her heart was of gold her kindness just as beautiful and Molly had the essence of an Angel that truly touched my heart.” He would pray for her safety and that she never goes away, wanting to teach her all there was to life he wished for her to stay his little girl, he had never had a child of his own. The professor sat one night with a cry of agony staring at a picture in a photo frame of a young woman with brunette hair, brown eyes, along with her pregnant bump, Molly awoke that evening after hearing those cries she came into the Professor’s room to say goodnight before noticing him crying as soon as she saw this she opened her mouth with the words in such a soft voice “Professor, what is the matter?” turning his head wiping away a falling tear to show her he is fine, Molly caught a glimpse of the photo frame he had in his hands.
Slowly she began to approach him with light steps and opened her arms reaching to hug him gently asking with wonder in her curious eyes “Whose that?” she inquired with a soft voice the professor turned to explain to Molly, “My wife Johanna and my unborn child, we were going to have a girl, We were going to be happy but sadly they were torn from me in a tragic accident, they both are in heaven now just like your family. But I am lucky because she sent me you Molly maybe she wanted me to be happy and not lose myself, We were going to call the baby Rose” Molly stood in absolute shock and wiped away his tear “Don’t worry Professor my father will look after them, I will never leave you” She informed him with a grin such a lovely girl Molly was. The professor just happened to be searching for happiness and he found it, his life felt fulfilled with Molly in his world all was perfect she made the world a better place he could not of wished for anything different.
One day the Professor became seriously unwell he came down with an illness that takes the life of thousands of humans each and every day. His condition became worse he was deteriorating by the minutes finding he has cancer he knew it could end badly. Molly was always by his side she always prayed for a day to come where he would make a miraculous recovery because he had made such an instant impact on Molly’s life she knew losing him would be the last thing she ever wanted. Each day of the week he would grow weaker and weaker, he was dying and Molly could not save him. One night she looked up into the night sky while joining her hands together small tears fell down her soft cheek Molly began to pray “Father, if you can hear me, please watch over the Professor, protect him and give him the will to be strong, I don’t want to lose him he needs me, Father if he dies please take him up to the kingdom heaven and look after him, he shall be with his wife and child, but right now he don’t deserve to die, please father I'm begging you right now let him stay upon this earth and I will be with him until it’s his time” She cried out in a prayer Molly Knew that it was time to despair she did not want to ruin this happy man’s life.
Molly spent hours and days by his bedside never wanting to lose him he was her world, A Daddy’s little girl she was to him, Molly opened her heart out to him for hours while she would sit and cry telling him stories of her land with such imagination, he knew now exactly what Molly was because one night when she was sleeping the Professor took a sample of her DNA it being a strand of her hair but it never matched anything of a human source it came back unknown, In fact the results were shocking, Molly was not of this world and he could not explain in his eyes the only explanation that came to his mind was that Molly was an angel, sent from his wife to take care of him, a natural heaven scented child. He was happy to die because Molly had came into his life when he needed love the most, Molly never left his side that is a dream come true.
The Professor had a deceased Child and Wife on the other side, but he did not want to pass away he held Molly’s hand tightly and murmured the words “Molly, if I die I just want to thank you for entering my life and leaving your angelic essence on my heart those memories will always be a part of the place I lived and I died in, This land will be scattered with the memories of the happy times and the day that you came to me and heaven sent me an angel, That dear angel was you, my Molly you will always be a part of me even if I live or die” Molly’s tears rolled down her cheek.
Later on that night the professor slipped away his soul swiftly flew right on by, a lovely light heading towards the sky to disappear into the night, gone like that he had lost his life and his cancer had proved fatal. Molly sat by his body holding onto his hand with dear life so tight not letting go, in such agony Molly began to scream her blue eyes bursting with tears, she did not want him to go the only person who had been there for her on earth who made her young life worth saving had now gone.
Molly turned away in pain yelling out to her father in another helpless prayer “Father, Father how could you take him away, I prayed! I called! and you never answered, if you took him away at least protect him and keep his spirit with you always, let him be with his wife and child please always watch over him” she fell to the ground and held her dear heart as it was breaking even she knew all things were meant to die at some point but she did not expect it to be this soon and then to be left here abandoned again by her loving Father who still did not let her come back home.
Molly stayed in the professor’s house for months, starting to go insane, was the mourning getting to her? or are all these dark voices true? She would hide knowing something was coming and it wasn't going to be great. As the days went on by Molly was always alone, taking a walk in the land of the home a place full of the deepest memories, Could it be that she was just like a human, Molly was now of no use to this world, But she loved it with all her heart. Molly became angry and the rage began to change her which then started to consume her, The voices ripping through her head, Her mind feeling as if it’s being burned by fire and the voices would show a careless whisper repeating the words “Join us, Molly, you are darkness we need you, your Father is gone nothing is left, join us Molly come to the dark side” Molly’s head kept spinning she had no clue what was going on and in a fit of madness Molly smashed everything up in the professors place and with that began running.
Molly ran as far as her legs could take her as far away from that place as possible sitting on the edge of an Old Bridge crying the voices would whisper “Why cry Molly, Crying means your weak, join us you won’t feel this pain any more” Molly turned her head upwards and screamed out in a yell “NO NO! LEAVE ME ALONE!!! GET OUT OF MY DAMNED HEAD!!!!!!” screaming as a passer by stopped and held her shoulder “Little girl? What be the matter?” The dark voice muttered to her with a sadistic smirk upon its deformed demonic human formed face, Molly turned her head in silence and whispered as her crystal blue eyes were slowly turning to black a darkness that was to transpire into young Molly’s self, a new her she was to become, a change was in the midst.
The man outstretched his hand for Molly to take it as she took it standing gently beside the man they began to take off walking, he was just like the devil in disguise a Madman with the heart of evil. The Man opened his mouth with a deep manly voice almost atone to cast fear in the hearts of many but Molly was not afraid “Now child tell me what is the matter?” Molly in anger turns to the smirking evil man and smacks him hard over the face, The Surroundings filled with laughter the man seemed to be amused so he told her “Good, great take that anger out on this wretched place, after all it did take your dear Professor away, and you’re damned Father left you here, Abandoned you when you needed him the most, come child be with me let me be your Father instead of him” he faked a smile taking Molly’s hand and walking with her to a place that he resided in, it was a dark mansion that reeked of blood and death.
Crossing her arms “Am I to live here?” she proclaimed as the dark man nodded with a grin “Yes you are, you are transforming, your eyes are black, you are becoming a part of yourself that was always hidden, that is the reason your Father kicked you out and you fell, now dear child do not worry for I will be your father you will have changed into a new person only a few more hours to go and you will be a dark angel” Molly nodded she knew of this change she could feel it throughout her bones, She was to wreck havoc and chaos upon this wretched world for tearing away her goodness.
A dark child made of blood with that Molly fed upon the blood of a demon and the blood of a human conducting the transpire to occur becoming from Angel to Demon, Her hunger became stronger as she started to become a darker part of herself, Her wings turning to black, her eyes turning to black, her heart full of darkness anger and rage emitting from her life-force, her face changed from angelic to monstrous, her body so much paler and stronger as she was beginning to like the new her she fed upon a part of the land that was meant to be a sacred part in which she caused a bloodbath over the land. Now stained with blood Molly could not care for anyone any more she had lost herself. Molly had gone nothing but evil was left her angelic side had subsided, now to have disappeared Molly now had another purpose she wanted to take wrathful revenge, a sinful child she had become.
A few weeks later the mad man dug a deep hole and he knocked Molly out into a deep slumber with a magic dagger, as in a few years she was to rise a stronger being, he then began placing her sleeping body into a coffin to seal Molly away, when finished he threw her down to the depths of the earth just reaching barely close to hell. In sometime Molly will be made of Darkness and her dark side will be the death of many. Molly was once known as a beautiful girl but she was angelic no more and now after many years she awakens but what will she awaken too?....
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