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Time's Will: Eyes of Phire

By carlislephoenix1 All Rights Reserved ©

Adventure / Fantasy

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College junior Patrick Martel completes all but the final day of Officer Candidate School. On that last morning the Marine helicopter he is on never returns. The catastrophic wreck kills all five of Patrick's friends and he is left in a coma, hovering at the edge of death. When Patrick does wake up all is not well. A demon wakes up with him, the kind that claws at Patrick’s mind and appears like a wraith in the shadows. This personification of Patrick's inner pain blurs his perception of the world and challenges his sanity. His internal battle against the darkness becomes an outward quest in a world of castles and magic, to not only face his demon, but discover the flesh-and-blood girl who can help him destroy it. Layered with rich allegory and parallelism, Time’s Will: Eyes of Phire takes the decidedly human fight for purpose and hope in the face of great pain and transforms it into the brutal but heroic story it truly is.

Time's Will: Eyes of Phire

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