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There once was a young boy and girl who lived by the sea. They had heard a fantastic story from their uncle about magical blue-green dust that could appear at the shore by the light of a full moon, but they never believed it -- until after this unusual encounter.
One day the children went down to the ocean to do what they always did -- splash in the waves, run up and down the beach and, their personal favorite, build sandcastles. The boy dug a large moat and filled it with water while the girl constructed long square walls of shimmering sand.
The hours went by, one after another, until the sun was nothing more than a thin golden sliver drifting on the distant waves. The two children stepped back to the water to admire their magnificent creation.
“It’s wonderful!” shouted the girl.
She strode up to the castle and lay down next to it, admiring its many tall towers of sparkling sand.
“I wish it could last forever,” she said in a sad tone.
The boy went up to the other side of the castle and lay down peering into its tiny windows.
“I wish we could go inside and explore it,” he said using a stick to carve out bricks in the walls.
“I’m tired,” the girl said with a large yawn. “Let’s grab a catnap before we go back for dinner.”
The boy yawned as well and fell into a deep sleep before he could reply.
When the boy awoke, he found himself standing in front of a massive wall of sand.
“Where are we?” the girl asked as she walked around the far corner of the huge wall.
“I don’t know,” the boy said.
Then he saw something that he recognized at his feet.
“The moat!” he shouted as he trotted around the near corner of the wall. “C’mon!”
“Where are we going?” the girl asked.
She didn’t know what he was talking about, but she ran after the boy because she was afraid of being left alone.
“This is our castle!” the boy shouted as he ran into the large foyer of the castle.
“It can’t be,” she said in disbelief.
The two ran up many winding staircases and past many small windows atop high towers. Then their excitement was cut short by a loud snapping sound from deep within the dungeons of their creation.
“We’d better get back,” he said. “The moon is rising.”
The duo ran back down retracing their steps to the main entrance, but their escape was blocked by a giant blue crab. It snapped its massive round claws at the children.
“Go to the shore!” the boy shouted. “Try to find the magic dust from the sand.”
“What magic dust?” she asked frantically.
“Like in the story! This is just like the story!” he shouted.
The boy fought off the crab using a shell for a shield and a sharp stick for a sword. The monster chased him out across the bridge and down toward the ocean. Then the girl appeared on the horizon.
“Now!” the boy shouted.
The girl threw a large handful of shimmering green and blue dust into the air. It fell on them both in a crystalline cascade in the moonlight.
The two woke up under the light of the full moon next to their castle. A small crab scurried out from behind the wooden bridge and into a nearby hole in the sand.
“What uncle said was true!” the boy said as he ran to the water.
“Do you think?” she asked as she crouched next to him.
The boy rubbed his hand across the wet sand right where the water met the sand under the full moon, and sure enough, a thin line of shimmering blue and green dust appeared in the sand at their feet.
RubyScars: I absolutely love your story! It killed me when I finished, I read it all at once and then it stopped at the epic cliffhanger! Uggggggh. But, that said, it just means that you have done such a lovely job. I am so in love with your complicated characters, and even the ones I didn't like you slowl...
Steve Lang: I thought this story was imaginative, and well thought out. I also think it was an original piece, and not a rehash of previous scifi stories I've read in the past.Thank you for the effort put into this tale, and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Nate_L: This story is amazing. The style, the description, it all drags you in. The characters are mostly the well known characters from King Arthur. There's Merlin, the sword: Excalibur. I recommend reading this through, at least a little, as it's a very satisfying read. I added it to my reading list af...
MegaRogueLegend666: I love this story so much. It's impossible to describe my excitement with each new chapter in words. The author has such a good writing style, very good descriptions of the fighting and character descriptions/emotions. the plot is also amazing! This fanfic could be a side anime show or novel ......
Lacey Schmidt: The Trouble with Super is that you can't stop reading it. Mr. Barrett's characters are all to easy to relate to even if you don't have a super quirk of your own, and their plight is both heart-rendingly funny and heart-warmingly sad at the same time. It's a bit like Office Space meets the Matri...
Alice Liu: Whoa! I've been wondering how would the Maurauders react to Harry's life and here we go! YOU ARE THE BEST! All the characters are consistent with their personalities shown in the book! I love how you compare Lily with Molly and it's definitely true for her being a mother! I wish Peter comes have ...
Tony Lee: Very interesting with good ideas! Would recommend it as a casual read. Been depressed for quite some time but this novel kept me occupied for about a week. If you enjoy fiction-thriller novels with some magic involved, then this is the novel for you.
Sandra Leigh: excellent story. Lots of classic fairy tale elements with a fresh spin. Very much looking forward to the sequel. However, there are a number of typos and minor awkward sentences. I occasionally work for my publisher as an editor and would not mind editing this for you. Feel free to contact m...
JWalker: I loved this story from start to finish! It flows at a really nice pace and the story world feels so real. The fight sequences are a treat especially when Isanfyre is training to become a warrior. I found the names really cool and thankfully easy to pronounce. Personally I have always struggled w...
Lauren Suzmeyan-Raine: I'm so glad you found a place to post your stories. I was horrified when I saw yours had been taken down, they are definitely the best 'reading' stories I've ever read. And I've made it my business to read every one I can. Well done.Lauren
Charlie_8472: Recommended to me by a friend, I thought I'd give this a read. As a hobbyist blacksmith, the blurb certainly caught my attention. I found the sentence about them drinking, dancing and fighting a strange combination of activities, perhaps a reflection of the writer’s personality and humour. Howeve...
Alex Rushmer: This was not what I expected, but I enjoyed it a lot Malfoy was always one of the characters that I liked a lot, so I like that a lot of this happens between him and Colette. I read the first couple chapters, and I enjoyed your writing style and am excited to see where you take this story. My com...
ga1984: I really enjoyed it! Characters were deep and plot was pretty complex. A bit on the violent side but it doesnt detract from the story. Very dark but situations make sense. Ends kinda abruptly and later chapters will need some editing work. I'm assuming there's more in the works?
FreakyPoet: "you made me laugh, made me cry, both are hard to do. I spent most of the night reading your story, captivated. This is why you get full stars from me. Thanks for the great story!"
Sara Joy Bailey: "Full of depth and life. The plot was thrilling. The author's style flows naturally and the reader can easily slip into the pages of the story. Very well done."