Maureen: Great story. A little rushed. I did enjoy how Ryker dropped the mate bomb.Your off to a great start the story is a little rushed and could have more to it but it is nice as a novella.An editor will catch what few mistakes you made, don't sweat it. I'm a writer also and I miss stuff too sometime...
bwhit1230: That was exciting! I just love these characters...can't get enough... moving on...💕💕💕
bwhit1230: So very good!Moving on to the next on and I know it will not disappoint ❤️❤️❤️
bwhit1230: I am enjoying this but can't wait to move on to the next💕💕💕
bwhit1230: So very close 😊💓