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By hudamohamed All Rights Reserved ©

Fantasy

Accidentally

Twelve o’clock now, O Prince ... now as the stories and movies it’s time to leave, .. O my sleeping Prince ..like cinderella did not seek time for her dreams and days, she smiled and continued ,..... but you know .... The only difference is that you are a boy .. and she was a girl ..
Aaah ... will you become like the Snow Queen and wake up from your sleep and forget that day?! ..
One day.... a strange coincidence .. bring us together by chance and made both of us new people,.... we changed to people who were in need of such a strange meeting .. not feeling time, it has passed quickly, the car will come soon and take you away ...they will not allow me to stay with you, me and you were meant to meet for some reasons I did not know in the first beganing, but now I knew why! .. strange coincidence we met , then we have to say goodbye at the end of the road .., you’re in a way I can not access ... how you made me weak?! .. how you made me fell in love with you?!.

In the meantime, the approaching sound of car brakes becomes aware, dried her tears, and she looked at the Sound place .., the car stops suddenly,... a man with tough , ego face was getting out..,he was wearing black suit and shiny shoes, from the other side of the car a lady looks small in age was getting ready to get down ..she look like an attorney works for that man ..she was wearing short skirt and jacket with large lenses and with her hand a several sheets ..
the man walks towards her, then when he reached her , he started defining himself
“hello.....iam ” Kadri El- Assiouti” ” hassan” ’s father,.. ”
The girl shyly smiled ..with a simple one she said ..
“Hello master” Kadri “... I’m ” Shirin Ka’oud “I work in the journal” caricature man ”
he smiled as well and said ..
“you must have been through bad conditions with him of course .. I’ll make sure that you get on your rights and what you waste of time with him ...
with her Scowl face ,with a little smile fade she said ..
“I did not wasting my time in vain ... I agreed to accompany him and only had the option to ignore it ..Excuse my misbehavior master “Kadri” But now I know why he did so, now I feel his loneliness, it seems sir you do not know your son at all ..
Forewarned her he shouted saying ..
“Commit your limits Miss” Shirin “... I do not allow any one was, to go beyond its borders with me.. I know how I deal with my son ... Thank you again, I will send to you circumstance with money, you should accept it well ..
she laughed and sarcastically said ..
“SAVE your money Mr “Kadri” I took my share in advance, I do not need anything.
She grabbed her purse and put it on her back , smiled to him and began to move away from the car , “Kadri” .. and “hassan”.
she returned back with her head ,...to look back inside the car ..that boy “hassan” ,.
with a sadly look she whispered to herself..” so he slept like angels”
and tearfully she started taking her steps one after the other forward ..
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