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Middle School Days

By Lucero Mendez All Rights Reserved ©

Humor / Fantasy

September

  
September - 30
 Well today was just perfect. I was accused of hitting someone. Again. I just found this journal in my room, but I don't think that it'll be able to hold all of my rants and adventures. It at least one inch thick. So why not use the internet?
  Anyway, so the guy was pretending to hit the kid in front of him, and I put my hand in is way trying to be funny. The teacher then came over and got made at me, saying that I hit someone! 
  I'm sorry, but the kid hit my hand, and I did practically nothing. Except put my hand out but that's beside the point! I didn't even have a chance to explain myself! 
  That's what I hate about school, I can never explain myself. Going to a collage-prep private school isn't any better at that. So today, I had to sit away from everyone at lunch and get lectured by the teacher. It really sucked. 
  After that I got into some more trouble. I got a 89 on my science test, my mom won't like that. Then I got my handwriting assignment. I got a 90. Shit. 
  Over here at this school, a 93-100 is a A, a 92-85 is a B, 84-75 is a C, a 74-70 is a D. Anything below that, and you just failed. 
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